Why did I stop reading towards the first chapters? because this novel has this famous cliché which facilitates the plot where the mc is not recognized at his true value because he has a talent problem even if he is very talented you will see why so if people hate to follow the greatest who is not at his place or despised and dont act like he deserve for the start of the story it's not for you
This story is really good. I liked the anonymity each character had, and the pacing was good as well. The characters are all different and well thought out and the settings are crafted well. Overall, I’m really enjoying it. :D
after 26 chapters and giving this book enough chance i conclude this is a chinese trash book . not worth spending ur stones to unclock .........
This is an amazing book. That's it, end of reviewno but seriously, this book in incrdible. ayesha's character is no nice, it's not relateable. However how marcus reacts to thingd, is how I would. almost to the dot. It's incredible!The world building a descriptiond are absolutely my fav part. The scenic description at the begining is literally amazing, and then as it goes on, the sutle yet needed descriptions aren't too wordy, nor to basic.i love this book!
So far so good.
I've waited for quite awhile to get the complete understanding that at least i need to judge the quality of the story here and for sure I'm fascinated.The author is obviously with passion, it's like he's trying to get you completely immersed in the world he has created which is large and full of a great potential for anyone reading this now and still deciding on whether to read the novel or not.The character design is literally built from the beginning and by the time we will see how much the protagonists are going to change ( for me I'm excited to know more about Irene and how she will change while being with jaxith)The fights are different and great, the fight sequences precisely are arranged in a scaling manner making it better over the time, not the regular one sided fights that the protagonist win at the end by a quick trick or discovering a hidden ability (became so cliché by the way), in here the author focused on fusing the knowledge of jaxith with his surroundings and ability to create a balanced fights that's at the end he just knows what's the right thing to do (the onohly was a perfect example on that but I won't spoil a word?)Overall, the characters are perfect and by the time we'll see much more as the author said before as he's focusing on jaxith and Irene relation building, the continent is large with 6 kingdoms, right now we're still in the first kingdom and literally there's a lot of content, the author knows what he's doing it's like I'm witnessing a hidden talent that just needs a push, he takes his time between the chapters to consider his plot well and that's something I really respect, quality not quantity although I want him to write more but at least he's stable, balancing between his job and writing isn't easy, but clearly he's talented, by the way, didn't you get a chance to get a contract, I think that you've much of a content now, although I think it won't be suitable with your timeline.Anyway keep it up darkash, I'm really fascinated by this novel, it's an adventure that I've not seen like in the webnovel and of course it reminds me with some of the most successful novels that I've read.
What a surprise, another pet novel is picked instead of other good novels. Sick and tired of this genre at this point. Hope that this repetitiveness is fixed and that other good novels are given a chance instead.
Hey there. I've now dropped my review on your book to show well deserved support. I've been looking for an interesting book for a while.You are amazing.
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This is pretty amazing to be honest. The writing quality has places for improvement. But overall enjoyable. It's funny, sometimes brings cringe to heart. I'll recommend reading it once to be honest.
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great story and thank you for novel . .