PilinyTheYounger
Pretty good, exactly what i wanted, ADHD power
(space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space)
Words can’t not describe how bad this novel is.
The beginning was actually pretty good so far. Aside from the transition, which gets worse with every chapter, the first 20 chapters are pretty good.
Chapters 20 and above, which I consider the trash hell, are filled with certain plot holes. Characters that are implied to be very important and interesting get thrown into the garbage bin and are never seen again.
The author loves making new side characters and dumps the other side characters; apparently, they are never mentioned. Oh, did I mention that every 30 chapters the plot completely changes, like it’s a different story altogether?
Character development? Zero, LOL, pretty bad. The main MC is literally the same, with no interesting development at all.
The writing quality is beyond garbage; honestly, you could compare it with MTLS. I challenge you to understand every chapter.
I strongly recommend not even bothering to read this novel, as I said, it’s pretty bad.?
Each chapter and plot look like there’s no intent or thought about them, which I am pretty sure this novel is AI-generated. Not to mention, this is a translation.
A translation of an AI-generated novel? Yeah, you can picture how bad it is already. ?♂️?♂️
OH MY GOD!!Seriously, this story is so amazing..one of the best I have read so far on Goodnovel. I really recommend all of you readers to read it once. Trust me, you will not regret reading this story as to why you chose this book...And yes..definitely, all credit goes to the author of this story...
Great story
brrrt here i am again▄︻̷̿┻̿═━一
Enjoyed the book and I love happy endings I know the grammar can be improved however the storyline makes up for it if you persevere
okay okay type
In love so far! When it’s the next updated ?
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Will there be a sequel
I enjoyed reading this ❤️. A good start. The first book. And more to come...
Beautiful story.
