Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
I can't wait to read more, it's an interesting novel ,good job!?
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Author, can we have more options to vote?
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A perfect master piece right here. The writing quality is definitely top notch and the character design is unbelievably so outstanding, and let me not forget the quality humor. I don't know how the author did it but she managed to create such a wonderful book. Although i'll advice that this isn't a book for people that aren't really comfortable with cuss words.
Good writing style can’t wait to read more.
Grammar is on point with a tint of first person perspective. I do love how each action he takes is expressed in the skill status. Its easy to read and quite understanding for a system novel. Kudos to the author, would be expecting more.
gosh one of the best novel I've ever read so far.I like how the author don't rush with the story but takes time and gives the best to let the readers enjoy it.Keep up the Good work, Author.
Caution: NTR by clone .... it gets real weird when it comes to the alter egos and clones...had to drop there since this is the first time Ive seen clones that are basically just new characters but share memories and are connected to the host, + gender bender. It got really strange out of nowhere. Authors taste is unique.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
"Itachi, can I see you use Amaterasu so I can see its effects on your eye?" Chopper asks which Itachi complies, closing his eye for a moment before reopening it and lighting a small portion of the deck on fire before immediately dousing it.