Mandatory 5 star Author Review here to help you decide if you should read this story or not, in case you are not convinced by the synopsis.This book will not contain smut, NTR, Yuri or any of those stuff.It will however have gave an annoyance, suspense, excitement, and cliffhangers. If you enjoy character driven stories with a wise MC this is definitely the book for you and I implore you to try atleast first 10 chapters before deciding if you wish to keep reading or not.
Great book so far, can’t wait for new chapters!!
Here’s a 4.8! Keep fixing the later chapters and I’ll change it to a five. Don’t stop writing!
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
This is a gem, a top notch story really, if u r a fan od dual cultivation, god of dual cultivation, naked sword art, this baby is on par if not better in some aspects. the system is great which isnt present in the other, the author has put a lot of effort into it. the lemons r defently top notch, the story has a lot of deapth, and so does the system. the story is fun. i realy like the fights there is just enough for it be exciting, and not to much it gets boring and have u skip 10 chapter and the mc is still in the middle of his swing. the back story also comming a long and have some depth. very good wrting as well. thats all positve stuff there is a lot more. so give a try u wont be disspointed i only wish there was 2k chapters.now for the low ponts, i wont call them bad, or negtives, as they r crutual to the story and it wont work without them, but i felt that they slightly slowed down the pace. and it all has to do with the tower. now u must understand the tower is amazing, and i feel that it still has not shown its depth and how good it can become. but at the same time it has so amny paths options and specs, that at some point i think between chapter 110 to chapter 140 it slowed down the pace of the story, just by simply going thro its upgrade and gowing down its option. and everytime it feels too big when it comes up and could monoplise a huge part of the story. now that is probibly a negative only due to the format of realase of daily chapter had it been a finished novel i would not have felt that way. as i always feel anything that slowes down main story is a negative, when i have to take it a chapter or two at a time instead of a finished novel. so its not really a negative of the novel just of the format mostly. but other than that its a perfect novel.
nice story work and script for the book when I read
I'm fairly new to writing novels, so there may be mistakes or inconsistencies that I haven't noticed. But I'm doing my best to improve as I go. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask, and don't hesitate to share any feedback you might have. Constructive criticism will really help me grow. Thank you in advance for your interest
The writing is very interesting and makes me really look forward to the upcoming developments. The world-building is detailed, too. Keep it up! I hope you continue to improve and succeed!
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nice book...............................
Very hooked to this book! Just started reading and already such a big fan of the characters. So much drama right from the start and I'm already cheering for the two of them to get together.
Mmm I got to say that the 10 chapters was good but I hope the mc has a bit of control over his body then what I saw yes I do love the story but I hope mc doesn’t act like he did when he meet the villain again. But has control but still likes her you get what I mean and why did his personality change from his first appearance it’s kind of weird that he was clam in the first chapter when Death was near but he was a cowered when he reincarnated to the game world which just made this novel from 10/10 to 8/10 and since he is a male character he shouldn’t have acted like that which makes me not want to read it but I get that it the other girl body so I was okay with it but I hope in the future he has control and is more daring to do stuff with the fl instead of her taking control over her will the novel was good that the only reason I give it a 10/10 for only 10 chapters because I don’t have much information about the novel