I really like this book but author is not posting updates....
Compared to the other trash that has been translated lately this book is great. Don’t get me wrong it still has it flaws, but at least it is readable and story is kinda good. It is definitely worth a read!
First off let me say that I love the thought and research that has gone into this novel as it even referenced the Large Hadron Collider which I think is great in itself. The novel has strong writing qualities and great potential. Give it a read.
Overall great book with smooth introduction into the story.Character development goes with decent pacing, making them well rounded (terms of traits & personality).World building which is also significant, describes the details good enough for the reader to depict the image of surroundings much easier.
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The story moves like a snail crawls, extremely slowly,however I really like the quotes at the end of the chapters. Also, author, please get an editor
You've got quite a good book there Rachy. And I am happy you were among those who won the contest. This book is awesome. I think this is the author's first gaming novel and she sure os doing a great job.If you haven't read, then I do not know what u are waiting for... Come on and read, good work author.
The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. ?
If you want sth unique. Sth new.. This novel is not for you. Just a cultivation novel, with many face slapping and cliches..............................................................
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