This book is ok so far. The translation quailty is about average, but it could definitely be better. There has been many plot holes so far. And the author likes to pull stuff out of his a**. This is definitely a book you read if you have nothing better to read or need a time killer. Overall I would give it a 5/10 or a 4/10 maybe. The story would definitely tick up a notch if the translation quailty improves. But the plot is not horrible and could turn out great. It just might take many, many chapters. The chapters could also become unreadable in the future though. Anyway I would suggest at least giving it a try. ??
I have read till chapter 22 and till now its really entertaining. really good story ?. plz don't drop it.
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This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background.Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc.Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo.Story Development: 3.2/5Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc.Character Design: 3.5/5It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story.This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it.When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya?
What a great start to an enthralling story! I'm always amazed when books I consider 'not my cup of tea' turn out to be exactly that. Well-written and told in the first person, the first three chapters launch you into a vivid and believable world. There are no grammar mistakes that can pull the reader from delving into this delightful story with a dark undercurrent. I look forward to more chapters and can definitely see this novel as being one that I pour much more time into.
This book is great and all, but the grammar is very frustrating to me. If you could somehow fix that, then I would be really happy. Other than the grammar everything is great, especially the character Erin.
Our MC transmigrated into the body of a villain and head of a demonic sect. The plot is decent and well paced, but nothing that grasps my attention.
Ughhh another system novel. Ah shit here we go again. .....................................................................................................
It's a very good novel,just read it once you will understand.Also author don't stop writing.??????????????????????????????????????????????????
I honestly think this is really good. The writing isn’t amazing but I like the storyline. I hope that the writer is consistent with the uploads and I believe that this could become a really great story
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What this novel needs is an editor. I like this type of novels and its frustrating to read a novel with broken words. The story has no problems so far till chapter 25