This novel has so much potential to be good and there are points where it’s fun to read. My complaints are:- The ranking/cultivation system is not mentioned leaving you to question what rank comes before or after.- the mc use of resources just seems so ridiculous and unnecessary- the author tends to drag the chapter out with useless information that is repeated over and over again just worded differently.- the world building and character description is barely satisfactory (I don’t even know how certain characters look only their names)This novel leaves so much to be desired and it sucks because it really has potential to be a great novel.
Perdón si escribo en español pero me da flojera escribir en inglés, me gusta esta serie es entretenida y bien argumentada por esta serie volví a ver bleach, solo opino que la tienda venda el byakugan Hyuga y el otsusuki por separado como una actualización o que venda linajes.
Shameless Author Review: I love doing these kinds of stories. It's like a horror movie where you watch a character and try to immerse yourself in their sorry situation, except it's a person from the real world in the world of naruto. It's a great story and I can't wait to finish it!!!!
PEAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK?????????????????????????????????????, W first novel
La historia es bastante curiosa,inicia con toda una reflexión sobre la belleza .
Dumbass used alts to rate his book. At least get a piece of braincell, don't do exactly 10, do atleast 3-4 more reviews than the exact number that shows a rating -_-If you aren't even enough to catch up to this then without even reading your piece shitty literature, I can say it's supposed to stay in the toilet pipes?
"So Writerz did you--"
I sighed and ready to give the answer.
"Oh?! It's okay" Souta said as he waved his hand.
"Yes," Issei replied, " but as it looks, I didn´t exactly do it right. Sorry about that."
"Konohamaru I am a little too busy to play right now because I have to train for the chunin exams, ya know" Naruto said as he clenched his fist in excitement.
Yoongi turned around with an annoyed expression on his face, glanced at you and turned back around.