Till now the novel is good , great plot development and mc . Just a request don't make Ren and novel's hero bff like rest other villain transmigration novels (except for chinese cultivation novels where logic does not work ) keep a certain amount of hate or rivalry among the novel's hero and Ren . It would make the novel more interesting than reading the same plot again and novel's mc had killed the novel's Ren which is the same as the other Ren .Don't make Ren sissy by simply forgiving others just keep his attitude like this only throughout the novel .My best wishes , please don't drop the novel
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A MC with a Xianxia system is always welcomed in here
Hello, Author hereThis is the story of a person who died regretting on Lossing many opportunities and loved one in his life.Then he reborn with a system.This will be the story of his adventure on a new journey that make his name resound through the universe.
highly recommend ?....support him,he has potential
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Really great story. Author jumps right into the plot, giving world-building here and there for an overall easy read. Love the descriptions and can't wait to see what songs the MC chooses.
I can't wait to read this novel, the author seems to be a very nice person and I'm excited to read my first webnovel ever! needa make it 140 characters
Liking the MC. MC has a goal to accomplish. World seems unique. Really liking the story. Will continue reading.
Shameless Author reviewThis is my first book so their are a lot of things I am improving on and would also like to know what things are there that I can improve on. So I would appreciate any feedback that I get. I am going to try my best to make the world feel as alive as possible with their being reasoning behind every action, the actions not happening just cause they need to for the story.
The story is very good perfect. Now I'm kinda hoping for mc and Ella interactions more or another scenario where another princess offer her hand to Mc would be nice to see her reaction or mc and Ella more in general. (Hopes Mc gets another buff soon cus the gap between him and others is getter lower and lower instead of widening like most.