The book is interesting, I love the world building and character design
Unfortunately every chapter is divided by "screenplays" that could be their own chapters. Lacks individual character development as well as world building, and proper plot progress's details. Can be at the top tier of kingdom building novels with a rewrite.
Second!I like the story...The FL is like a puzzle and her identity is unknown. She is a villainess princess and a cancer patient but nothing was described about her job before having cancer. I am eager to know more about the FL since she mentioned how good she was at using guns and snipping! So what is she exactly?I want to know! I also want to know who the ML will be! Ahhh! I feel extremely excited!
Author here? Thanks for choosing my story!Q&A TIME!!!! (Drop ur questions!)Anyways I love my work! so 5 stars form me (because I can!)So, this the very 1st fiction I am writing, and to be honest I am so damn nervous. Some of the 1st few chapters may have some purple proses, as I am very new to this. (Heck at 1st I didn't even know what 'purple proses’ means) after few chapter I don't add unnecessary proses, so worry free. and I now write short sentences.SOME OF THE THINGS ABOUT THIS STORY:-1. NO HAREM (I despise harem)2. Op MC (cause. .why not! )3. Immortality (This mf 'MC' can't die)4. Beautiful girls. (cause.. I can and I will..)5. Really beautiful girls. (but no harem)6. Secret Identity. 7. Quantum physics (I love it)That's all! cya! drop ur questions.
This Is My Honest Thought. I'm Excited About This — This Is One Of The Best Things Ever. You Know, You're The First Author Whose Written Something Good, Yet Extracted From Our African Progeny And I I Highly Recommend You For This. lemme Spam Ya!
My second "Original" Novel. I admit there's some wish fulfilment and edginess in the novel, so beware of the edge lord alert. It's something I wanted to try, So I tried, well life's too short for regrets anyway. Hopefully, I can stay consistent with this one. And like Always I am giving myself 5 stars which I "totally" deserve
Thank you to everyone who continues to support the story. I will do my best to improve. To all readers, please read at least half of the free chapter first. And to those who have supported me all the way, thank you again!
The writing quality is amazing even though the author claims "I'm a newbie writer
5 star for another masterpiece i have read. It’s plot was ??????, the characters and everything especially Akari, I’m hooked. The way how Asahi and Fuyutsuki died early but still you showed us their strength despite dying. The bestx??????
Remainder:-If you want to read this ff then turn off your brain ? i think the author is 12 or 13 years old naming sense ? it's like whatever mc is ok.
slow. Very Slow. But totally worth it. I totally recommend. It has future.
Alright. So far, I've read up to the first 6 chapters. Each chapter was like a rope that weilded me in. First off, props to the author.The way he delivered these first 6 chapters was hilarious, amongst all the seriousness the Mc (Hugo) is facing. the author does his best to incorporate a bit of comedy here and there.The first six chapters made me laugh, and I hope it'll stay that way. (Props to you ?, You cooked)