Great story! eagerly waiting for the story to be completed. love the characters and their roles can't wait for the end. Thumbs up to the writer!!!!
This is prime example how you do NOT write a good fantasy novel. The story is all over the place. Characters act like a binary code - one second they are admiring mc, then over some non-existant cause they are out to gouge his eyes with a spoon (real people don't act like that, which may be a surprise for author). Mc himself is badly written mary sue. The world is generic and rules are non existant, cause author writes them down ONLY for the mc and any other character to break them in the next paragraph. Oh, also "zoomer language" is not helping. Over all this is worst novel, no, worst piece of media I saw in a LONG time. So am I writing this? Well, you see, this TEXT is somehow 4th place in rating, hence why I picked it up. Turns out, you should never trust in ratings.
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. Follow me for exp ;)16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;)17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
All Chinese novel clichés got fulfilled in the very first chapter (well, aside from the arrogant young master thing). The characters are beyond dumb (Not only the MC). An example would be that your brother may die because of his heart disease, which needs medical attention. That character however decided to say she wants to stay by the MC's side for some frickin reason. Shouldn't count as spoiler since it's in the first 2 chaps. Should only be a right cup of tea for young teens that love such things and aren't tired of it already. Hope this helped you.
Hello there lovable readers. I'm seeing a lot of positive opinions here and it's nice to see it.Well if your good hearted at least also say your opinion as a form of review pls hehe. (I am so mischievous)
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