This is a gripping first start and the chapter title already got me on the edge of my seat, 'love at first sight', imma see how this unfolds.
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Funny, witty and keep your toes. Wish you have more coins to keep you read more chapters.
I hope you enjoyWhat to expect?- Power system that changes as the story progresses- Long conversations between chars- Only a little Romance- Sometimes you'd see the same event from a different Point of View And a lot more, Read and judge it yourself!If you have feedback, then write it hereOR! Just Discord me (adham4annie)Once again, I hope you enjoy.
there are around 5 consecutive chapters that haven't been updated from a preview which breaks the story up, recently there has been released chapters that only have half of the chapter the remain half is from previous chapters. The story is interesting and has a good balance to progress and world building, unfortunately the previous mentioned problems have let this novel down.
One of the rare stories where MC reincarnates as a NPC in a game. Story and characters are interesting so far.Issues with inconsistency. Like:Paragraph 1: You can only mine iron and copper ores with Mining level 1. Higher tier ores need higher Mining level.Paragraph 2: You need 5,000 exp to go to Mining lvl 2, but if you get really lucky you can mine a few high level ores and instantly level up.Author sometimes rewrites the rules for how things work the very next paragraph.
Good story Personally the story seems immature but itbis this immaturity which gives it its ‘uniqueness’Please dont decrease the wuality and please do not drop itI like the fact that the character development is based in arrogance cos it seems he has still not learnt from his brother’s advice(i kinda like the attitude he shows sometimes though)Wonderful story
Wow, like the prologue already took my heart away! It goes ahead in a literally claming sense and there comes the twist, I like it how the author hs paced the story❤️✨keeping writing this beautiful story
Hey author. Liked your work. This is my second time writing a review for your novel. the reason?because I want to answer some of your questions.first: yes, I liked Ryan's past about his traumatic "First girlfriend" experience. I would like to read more about it.Second: The question you asked in your discord; about that, I would like to see Ryan turn into a vampire right away. but you said that that is not the main point here so it can't be done by changing the story's current plot. so let it be. Third: The pace he's evolving is great. Ryan's Ring System is perfect in my eyes. it would be nice to see Ryan going on another plants to hunt monsters with his System. I hope you upload those chapters ahead in the story. That was it from me. Thanks for the good novel.
I don't want to spoil too much, but after a few chapters I have a grasp on what the style is like, and while the first chapter has a kind of zoom in effect with suitably much background about the world, the dreamy, ethereal feeling of the character decipted just floating through the world comes to an end and the story kicks in. I won't say much about the plot. It is not my place - this is not the kind of book I normally read. But the style is immaculate, and the flow gets you reading, the world is vivid and the feeling of moving is certainly there. I have nothing to complain about.
i am here to show everyone that i had been here sense the beginning of when the novel came out!! i am here to show everyone that i had been here sense the beginning of when the novel came out!! i am here to show everyone that i had been here sense the beginning of when the novel came out!!