This story is going great and I find it fun and intresting to read, personally I feel the story is a bit rushed, if you csn please kind of elaborate things and take it a bit slow, so that we can really immerse into the story rather then just feel like reading a rushed story, apart from the pace everything is really awesome keep going, hope you continue uploading.
so far so good, hope it continues. keep it up ?
To be honest, I'm not really a fan of system books, but this is an exception. Suffice to say, it's a must read
Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further
Really great novel with a calculative mc with a good drive.
I can’ wait until vampire system ends so he will focus more on this book. It has a huge amount of potential and honestly with its more down to earth theme it makes it more enjoyable.
Author's note: Hello, everyone. I hope you're having a great day. I just want to let you know that I aim to respect everyone in this novel. I do not intend to disrespect anyone's beliefs, country, or race. Therefore, there will be no mention of religions or racism in this novel. Everyone is welcome to join in, and I have made an effort to make it easier for you to decide if this novel is your cup of tea or not by the end of Chapter 7. I wish everyone a great day.Sneaking a 5-star over here nvm, XD.
Hi! This is your author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know it well, comment any constructive criticism, comments, and questions, I will always be here to satisfy your doubts! Also, I enjoy this work! I make them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thanks for reading!
This book looks intriguing and I’ve added it to my library.. will definitely read this!
-Prolog
"Assistan!" the doctor shouted.
"Oh boy, I'm not the one who will--"