I see a fellow moa here and I also agree with your comments, I also think the same thing. Why can't at least once, a good novel where the mc isn't horny, because a bunch of good novels with/without the tag harem got ruined by the romantic female characters and their plots. It truly ruins the mood reading all that few chapters about that certain woman.
i stopped At 500. other than translation issue, i got tired of them always bickering.
Feng yuheng u have to goback in the future to cure people that inffected with corona virus
i love this book , pls update! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Author here, fellow mortals!
Name is Don, I am a writer since 2018. My previous stories are Dragonborn Saga and The Unholy Mage, which are on hiatus for some time now.
I hope to gain your support and encouragement on this story as well.
read up to the 4th chapter so far. nothing new or unexpected(yep seems all 2nd generation young masters are r@pists who claim a woman for themselves as easily as picking objects at store, no wonder feminists hate men lol)
If I have to describe the book in a few words, it would be--> Harry Potter, but better.Harry Potter had its charm, but this one is on another level. It has a little bit of comedy, some DnD elements, a lot of spells, a world full of magical creatures, and many other things. I have read the first 17 chapters of the book, and I am now hooked. Do give it a try, and you will be hooked in the first 10 chapters as well.
Story is well written and good. Sometimes story feels disconnected fir some chapters well it kept the intrest and maintained the pace. It makes me remember noah balvan from mcs techniques and background . Keep it up Thanks for the story though?
I thought this story would be an ordinary reincarnation story. But, oh boy, I was immediately presented with a reincarnation+tower-like system when I kept reading the next chapter. The author provides enough suspense in this story. I just wish he didn't let this annoying woman stay with him as the story progresses.
The story idea itself is good but I just couldn’t understand some parts of the story it’s like he just didn’t care to make a story that made since.
I’m starting to see a trend with Lumydee’s novels…Tech King (first novel) - MC has a system that really doesn’t care about its host.Amusement Park (second novel) - MC has a symbiotic relationship with his system, neither is dominant in the relationship.Host what are you? (Third novel) - MC just thrashes his system around.This novel (fourth novel) - System is utterly dominating/ tormenting the host.What’s next? A system that does everything for its host… wait actually that’s a pretty good idea, a system that hasn’t ever gotten a host and is excited when it got a cowardly and weak host and develops some yandere tendencies when it finds out how useless the MC is. Using the Lumydee style of naming novels I dub it “Who dares touch my Host!” If you ever take my idea and not give credit I’ll sue you for like 6 dollars and a can of soda.
i have been here since chapter 1 please dont drop this you have made an amazing story and if yoh plan on dropping just make an ending dont blue ball us please