Please read this book and tell me if you love it
The Angel of the next door is one of the bestest girl of all words of anime that I watched
Ohhh boiii do I lovee thisss...you paint the perfect picture with your words alone, and not only am I able to feel as if I can see everything that you explain, but the way you've been able to capture certain feelings and them launch them out to us readers...10 out of 10.
Let me marinate this novel first for 2-3 years it only has 2 books at wattpad and the story is getting CRAZY AS HECKK!!
it's very intriguing and interesting I liked it
A lot of early info dumps and stat screens. gets better as the story goes on.Power system feels...confusing still. MC acts like he should in most cases in my opinion. world building is there. pacing I feel could be sped up slightly. 126 chapters in and it's only been 4 days. but a LOT of shit happens during that time. just.....a LOT of stat screens. truly hope he's able to hold onto his humanity to a certain degree. I also hope Micheal: 1) gets the necro heart thing, 2) ACTUALLY CULTIVATES!! but I really believe this novel is good and could be great. worth the read.
peak fiction. that is all i am going to say because this will become one of the best novels to ever exist if it isnt already... now off to write more!
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Gotta say its a good novel, the mc is well umm.... Lets just say i get mad quite a bit with himBut the plot is progressing in a fun way i like it, but i kinda feel he's been given some "fate" or "luck" however you want to call it since he meets people with a high standing atleast in the "mortal world" and theres a few "coincidences" and "misunderstandings" but i would recommend it(i just wanted to add that the possibility for a world like this to exist that is a replica of the mc's earth, is literally impossible and i hate that it is portrayed that way but that's more a me thing so dont mind it)
story development slow. I think he has been stuck on 11 years old for a while now. like, come on, get in trouble enough that you gota go rescue liana. or liana gets taken unless he shows his true self. forced to go school. something.
Alex’s story is a hauntingly beautiful dive into the complexities of identity, mental health, and human connection. Their introspective nature and struggle for self-expression feel deeply authentic, making them a character you can’t help but empathize with.The relationship between Alex and Emma adds a tender layer to the narrative, offering moments of quiet solace and understanding. The symbolism of Alex’s notebook and their dark, layered clothing reflects their inner world with subtle brilliance.This isn’t a flashy or fast-paced tale it’s a raw, thoughtful exploration of life’s deeper questions. If you’re craving something meaningful and introspective, this story is a must-read
Mcs is not really likeable. The author portrays his nonchalanct, and the melancholic attitude doesn't really strike me. One chapter tries to humanise him with a tragic backstory, but it's too short, and it didn't really convey anything at a deeper level. Romance is honestly borderline, not there