Can we just take a moment to appreciate the dialogue in this section because the author is genuinely talented at making people sound like real people? The producer's Weibo post is a masterclass in passive-aggression. "Actors who are used to staying silent always end up at a disadvantage. Fortunately, the hardships are behind us now." Translation: I'm suffering and you should feel bad for me. And the comments section? Pure chaos. "Our Xiao Fang has really suffered, having to deal with a former coworker like that." This is how real internet discourse sounds. It's messy and manipulative and completely believable. But what really impressed me was the behind-the-scenes dialogue between the production team. Song Zhizhi explaining why she added that scene: "Since they were coming anyway, might as well milk some CP popularity." And then her follow-up about how it actually reinforces the core theme? That's the author showing us that even accidental creative choices can have depth when you're working with smart people. And Ying Shi's internal monologue throughout is so distinct from everyone else—she's observant, analytical, occasionally self-deprecating. When she thinks about the orphanage and how "feelings weren't like a salary, you couldn't calculate how much to give," that's not dialogue, that's narrative voice, and it's beautifully rendered. The text has this warm, slightly wry tone that makes you feel like you're reading someone's actual reading journal rather than a polished essay.
Very good!
I love this story but I’m missing my updates ??. Trying to be patient lol. But it is a great and unique reincarnation story. I hope that the author can continue this wonderful story.
I love this novel your write up is top-notch
It had quite an interesting introduction, and had a pretty big plot twist…the description is also really good and the characters feel real. Although the mc gives me strange and eerie vibes, I can tell that this can become a really popular novel
Awesomeeee, Can't wait for more chapters.
I wasn't expecting to find a hidden gem today. so far, everything looks just fine, Keep up the good work, author.
Wow, 'Kente' is such an amazing story! I'm totally hooked on the characters and the plot twists. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please release more chapters soon—I'm eager to continue this journey!
Good Start, Like I said it can be improved.... not being to harsh as this is your first novel but, you already are writing two best fanfics rn... hopefully you will continue and will not drop it
The author does a great job of bringing the reader right into the world of eerie elements taking place throughout Shouichi's return to Kurohashi. The writing is smooth and fluid, and it's overall incredible. No overly describing to bore out the readers, and just enough to satisfy your imagery.Well done author!
I really love the world building and character distinction in this novel, a must read for everyone ??
Very interesting, I love the historical aspect of this novel and cant wait for the updates ?? author if you drop just know that.........