I can't review this story past a 1.0 without there actually being a story/chapters to read.
Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.
Really loving this novel!! Make sure you keep posting author. Love the MC
"Do you know what he did to you?"
"Soon you will know by yourself."
I took back the handkerchief that was bound on my head. It was just a cheap girly handkerchief. I stared at it for a while and then put it inside my pocket.
" a true goddess will always care for others than being selfish , not like some fake goddess who take all the credits to themselves "
Now the battle actually begins. I dodged his attack and countered it with a punch of my own. I hit him in the face on his left. He backed off while brushing his ached cheeks. He turned at me and muttered, "Heh, as expected from a boxer."
So many hardships so many loses sure id be able to live a life of love and peace but what would the cost be my future self knows and he also knows that I'm only able to keep myself out of another hell with the experience and strength gained in that hell so he keeps learning and gaining strength for him and his new and old loved ones so it doesn't happen again as he doesn't know what he'll do if it dose.
The man seems to love what he is seeing because someone is not dying when touching him. His body tells that I want to touch this woman. His thoughts were filled with something like ' so this is the feeling of someone's warmth.' So he stops Gaia who's talking and kisses her without thinking.
"Go on!" He started. "Why, my God! they used to go there by the hundreds."
"Why...why… why did you have to come? We had never planned on hurting the living in the first place… we just wanted to live and… and..."