The Infernal System

a good novel well written as well as it's gu worms...................................................................................................

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There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zubI know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.

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Author, I have yet to read your novel ! But I want to ask you how you Named your novel, What the meaning of your novel's name. "Yandere ?"?

It is a very generic novel, the author at least in the first phase did not bother to explain things, he was simply writing superficially and quickly, in my opinion there was a lack of writing with more details and explanations, as it took only 2 chapters and the MC  he goes from an ordinary human who planned the death of his parents and committed suicide (he was aware of his luck, money and escape were possible) to a great powerful magician. I reading, but it is more out of false hope that the author leaves aside worn clichés and a little attention to detail and originality.