This made my brain hurt. I mean is it as bad as the harem/ OP nonsense that seems to just be a constant on this app, no. However, it really needs some work down to its core to be read without cringing.
if there was something lower than one star I'd five it. this the type of guy to have 4 wives because they wanted some noodles
This story is a decent addition to the new genre of Protagonist hunting, however Yang ming is portrayed as a nut job , or psychopath for no reason at all. I understand that his character before reincarnation was so but making him a murder loving psychopath who insults people and kills for the heck of it is not acceptable in my opinion.Still the story is interesting and moves at a fast pace, It could do with a lot less internal monologuing , its boring to read those parts.
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This novel started well, then you have a sharp drop then well again then another sharp drop now i don't really now.At first i liked it it was somewhat novel for me, then the mc started having problems with his cultivation and i liked this too somewhat ( it was a first) however the author has a tendency to waste chapters like the first time he had problem with cultivation was fine, the second time no with the second time we have a lot of chapters where i don't really feel anything like the mc goes from place a to place b and things happen but at the end the mc is still the same. we also have the clones of the mc which are a totally fillers if you jump them you lose nothing the clones also have problems with cultivation so no progress for them at all ( we have DOZENS of chapters on the clones that are totally pointless, the novel has what? 300 chapters? maybe not 1/3 but definitly 1/4 of the novel is only on the extremely boring life of the clones).The clones wouldn't really be that big of a problem but the author only publishes like 2/3 chapters a week so you can really feel those fillers.Still at the i somewhat like the novel even tought the clones are slowly grinding down my rating.
I had a beef with the author when it seemed this novel was dropped and planned to blast him to heaven(dont mind me????)Wonderful novelIntriguing plotOk charactersIm blank about the world developmentAll in all wonderful storyPlease don’t drop
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Just under 20 chapters in and I think it's a great story with a unique premise. In my opinion though, this is probably some of the best quality writing I've seen on this app. Very few grammatical errors and no major inconsistencies that constantly kick you out of your groove. I think that's what I appreciate the most. Would highly recommend. ??
Absolute garbage. Farily interesting for first 20 chapters, then devolves into the cliche, garbage-tier young master bullshit that has phased out 20 years ago.It’s repetitive and mind numbing. Such a disappointment.