Well, it's just been one chapter, I'm loving the book but really wants to know more. And I'm impressed by your work, you did a gooood work there. please keep updating, can't wait.
I actually really enjoyed these twenty chapters of trail read, I mean normally with a system like his the MC would would do one thing or another to showoff ( attentional or not ) while these give off a mt slice of life feel where the Mc is not absorbed into the system and uses it more like a passing moment. I especially like the way the author writes the character thoughts even side character you hear thoughts behind their actions making it feel less that things are happening just to happen
quality of this translation is very low. sometime MC become he or she. it's very confusing to read. I lost few of my brain cell......4/10...
Fans of Doctor stone will also love this book. Careful research, interesting plot points, and an overall fresh plot are the great strengths of this book
The only thing the story doesn't fail at is grammar. The combat system is non sensical. The plot is full of routines. The cheat is boring and inconsistent. The mc doesn't even remember his skills. The economy is busted. The numbers of the novel don't make sense. He levels up to the se level repeatedly and learn skills with levels he don't have and aren't helpful.
Thank you author for your effort and this story. The story kept me going chapter after chapter. I have yet to finish hence picking it up to my reading list and dropping you my review. Here are my comments1. The whole story built up is commendable - truly well done from the start of how villin witnessed the death of the boy’s parents and taken in by the Silver to how he was trained until he enter the academy. The background to him attaining the different level of knowlege of a magus is well described 2. Creativity in plot and ability to draw the description of scenes allowing users to visualise clearly. As i read the chapters i am able to visualize each scene clearly. Eg. how the academy looks like, the classes, the time when Villin touch the crystal to his awakening, the corridor to the classes, the battle between Aiden and Amelia, the attack from Rolland to Villin - i could visualise it clearly as a result of the vivid description including the “test” set out by Pompei for his students how the fire ball went towards Kayley and Villin. Also the part where Villin fixed the crystal holder in class.3. Content structure. It takes a lot to think through the content for such magical realm and world - this is done well and delivered effectively by the author from the use of wands, to web nodes awakening to wandless curses and spells. The classes and grades and lessons that are taught - i enjoy reading and deciphering these content. 4. Peak and story climax - i am reading from competitive student battle (aiden and amelia, Villin and his oponent on crease and cut) more and more exciting part from attacks to battles and surprises - this leaves readers stuck on the narrative turning one chapter to another - good manouvering on the plot leaving trails of excitement here and there. Absolutely a must read for Harry Porter fans alike or magical fantasy - great built up of the entire world of magic. Look forward to read how Villin’s character will further evolve into and perhaps mega battle of the magical kingdom and forces to come. Good job author in putting in the effort for book. Keep up the good work!
ah I knew when reading the first chapter it seemed familiar. read it a long time ago when on ********** and novelupdates. its a great novel unfortunately stopped translating around the 60s ch and I think the original stopped around 100 and now the links are dead on novelupdates so am happy seeing it here. I hope you cont and finish the story if u can
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First let me say I love the story, if i only liked it id have dropped it. seriously needs an editor. lots of spacing errors that have the correct words but two words end up wrong as a result. Some incorrect words and some words that only make sense if using a thesaurus(those i actually dont mind bc it expands my vocabulary even if i have to look them up). I really like the mc and his OP “I cultivate everything” setup. Im interested to see where things go from here (im in the 60s chapter wise currently) To the author let me say good story, keep writing and I’ll keep reading.
Raw Title: 网游之倒行逆施Status: 3242 (Completed)
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