This is the first review I’ve done and I felt I had to because no one else has and this book is great. Although it only has seven chapters and the last time it was updated was seven months ago from the chapters there are I can tell it is going to be a great so please don’t drop it.
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Amazing Writing! Everything is falling into placeThe story begins with a fantastic first chapter that grabs your attention right away. However, the sudden transition to a school setting felt a bit abrupt at first, but it quickly drew me in.The academy arc takes around 15 chapters to wrap up and fully establish the world and its mysteries. While it's longer than I typically prefer, the setup itself was an enjoyable read.The characters are engaging, and their interactions are often both amusing and layered with deeper meaning. The development of the two protagonists is particularly well done.What stands out to me the most is the remarkable attention to detail. Even the smallest, most subtle elements are intricately woven into the story, ensuring nothing is left unused.Though I noticed issues in nearly every chapter, such as plot points or dialogue that didn’t always make sense, I initially mistook this for shallow writing. Over time, I realized that the author intentionally included these inconsistencies, which makes their resolution in later chapters all the more rewarding.I really enjoy the writing style, which strikes a perfect balance between predictability and surprise, similar to some of my favorite stories like Lord of the Mysteries and Shadow Slave. The cliffhangers are especially sharp.Overall, I would highly recommend this, rating it 9/10.
The story is doing pretty well and it was a worthwhile read for me.....highly recommended for romance lovers like me..... ?
a história é muito envolvente. é chama atenção
Started good looking for more from this novel
The best novel, with :OP MC HaremLemon ( R#18 )MC not SIMP or BETA.
So far, so good. The MC is a devious little shit, but I love it.He isn't a hero and loves to cause trouble among the class while he starts stealing their lovers.
Starting off strong. Grabs the imagination and keeps on rolling.
Great novel, from great author.I absolutely recommend it
Since reading ? this novel, I've been hooked unfortunately I don't make enough money to send gifts I would be showering this novel with castles and the likes (someone/anyone please spore this novel it's been a blast)#Liking the new theme/profile picture very cool ? ? ?
Love the story line, looking forward to enjoying this novel. You have my thumbs up author. But please write more. I need update splease. Thank you