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A Story About Someone Who Didn'T Get To Live A Long, Normal And Healthy Life, Someone Who Was Thirsty Of Such A Life Through A Convinient Error In The System Which Transfers The Souls To The Afterlife Finds Himself In A World That He Only Thought Could Be Possible In His Fantasies

Note:I'M A Newbie To Both English And Writing In General, So If You Have Any Tips About What Im Doing Wrong Please Feel Free To Tell Me

***I Just Made A New Cover, Hope You Like It! (Yes, I Did Made Him Look Older Than 12...I Did It In Case I Do A Skip Or Something)

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Rating(3.3 / 5.0, 26votes)
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The cultrivation system in the novel isn't bad, nor is it good.The plot is repetitive and every single girl he has gotten always has him saving her from 2 gang members lol. It is like women cannot drive in the novel. The mc is not smart, but you have to always keep in mind in this "he is...". His idea's are elementary level. Legit a six grader could come up with them all. He believes he is still in his old life so he is unstoppable... but in reality his daddy who he screws over has been protecting him in secret.He has zero personality or loyalty. Truly he would stab his own mother in the back if she prevented him from screwing some random waitress. This entire novel is trash.sadly I DON'T mind this and i am currently caught up over 1000 chapters. I do not expect change or him to have character development. It is like a bad tv show that is fun to watch with nothing else to do. so check it out when you have nothing to read lol
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If you want to read this then I advise for you to turn off your brain and just skim through this trial novel.. It contains simp MC, stupid MC, and MC always complaining about the system.Sidenote: MC after receiving the system becomes stupid and becomes a mindless simp...Writing Quality ★ ★ ★• Translation is great not like the previous trial novels which are basically worse than MTL..Story Development ★• Wish fulfillment novel, MC got a system by having cold, he gave a pill to his "ugly" classmate and when he saw the face under the hair, he was enlightened and became a simp. He ate a super brain pill and made the teacher dumpfounded.Character Design ★• It's a meh, imagine giving an adult a phone and they didn't know how to use it, instead of figuring it out they just cry and complain... ChildishUpdsting Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★• Nothing to say hereWorld Background ★• Just China...
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Literally amazing. Actually realistic and intelligent- The main character uses his system to gauge the world, understand difficulty and make deductions. I find the concept very interesting and it should be at least top 30 on the site given, how bad are the plots some of the novels there have.If this doesn't get picked, I'll revolt.
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Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
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They kept this garbage, really??u200d♂️. The books they got rid of was better than this, but you know editors choice and all??................
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My 4th grade nephew once told me a story about his field trip, and it still a better story than this.                                          
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