Read the first chapter and I'm a fan. This is most definitely collection worthy. I'm hoping to see more worldbuilding elements in the later chapters, but so far its a hit.
Wo! This novel is really worth it. The first chapter and 2nd chapters were slightly boring, but God is it better from that time. A gem!!The comedy and actions sequences are its strengths. Grammatical error? Didn't find a single one. The language is really evocative.
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Wow!! the book is amazing. readers the book is worth reading please don't scroll pass it.
Added.Hope to see some wholesomeness like we used from you.And, wlc back?
I have to admit that I just read up to the chapter 10, and the MC has already gotten a mythical cultivation pill and impregnated a sect master that is at the same time a 9 tail fox....i may keep reading whenever i don't have brain enough for anything better. Good grammar in general with very few mistakes, tho
great storyline I like the writer's writing style and overall story is great
The once rhythmic beat of my heart grew erratic, fast one moment and agonizingly slow the next. It felt like my very existence was revolting against me. Each breath I took was shallow, weak, as if my lungs had forgotten how to draw in air. The anxiety clawed at my throat, a silent scream that refused to leave my lips. When the tears came, they were sudden and overwhelming. They streaked down my face, hot and unrelenting, leaving me gasping for air. I hated crying—it felt like admitting defeat—but no matter how much I tried to hold it back, the dam would always break. The fear, the loneliness, the inevitability of it all—it was too much for one person to carry. Even in those moments, I found myself wishing. Wishing that someone would notice, that someone would care. But the world around me kept turning, oblivious to my pain. And so, I sat there, clutching my cup of cold coffee, staring at the rain-streaked window, waiting for the end to come.
A refreshing change in scenery. The zombie apocalypse trope is one that’s been overdone, but this book is a breath of fresh air. I recommend.
Muy buena escritura como siempre. Me gusta que la historia se desarrolla un mundo de fantasía con magia, quizá lo único que le faltaría sería que hubiera más razas, ya que de momento solo parecen haber humanos. Por lo demás todo está genial.
Newbie writer here , just trying to make something worth reading
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