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When Young Justice reccommended this novel to me I can say I was intrigued, but hesitant. It wasn't until Oliver stepped in-game that Deevi was successful in sucking me in. I am now loving how this story is delevoping! Excited for more!!Minor typos, but nothing major that kicks me out of the story.
OK my first review here, normally i don't review at all but this book broke the mold for me so far. i love the idea behind it, the MC seem well fleshed out for current story progress and im Really hoping that this book continue's for at least a 1000 chapters :D To the author i can only say Good Job i hope you keep em coming, you got at least one more Fan.
Machine Translation, the grammar is awful.there is almost no use of "is" and is almost always "was" or "had".Past tense is all messed up.He, she also cannot be trusted because a machine cannot determine he or she through chinese and contextIt is an otherwise good story
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I'm impressed with the concept. The story changes. From chapter 1-40 the MC is really....Umm he is not worthy? But author changes it.thank you and more chapters to come.I can barely understand it.
Since the other guy gave 1 star for no reason on a quite nice novel in my opinion I shall give 5 stars too. .........................................
It’s eerie and movie like and it’s one I couldn’t stop reading! For a Sci-Fi fan, this is a really good book with great quality of writing. Fell in love with Jet and other characters instantly.
read 4 chapters and the grammar is extremely bad, can hardly understand anything that's happening because there are grammar mistakes literally everywhere, and yet he begs for golden tickets in the beggining, from the good reviews I've seen about flowing grammar and writing structure, I can tell he 1. deletes reviews or 2. writes his own reviews with different accounts, I cannot stress enough about how awful the grammar is, the story so far and how it's conveyed is great and character's feel like they have personality already... but the grammar ruins it all
Writing Quality for this site this writing quality is mind-blowing in the grand scheme of things there are points to criticize, but if you're reading off of this website this is top-notch.Stability of Updates from what I understand from reading about the updates, they're rather sporadic in their timings; of course, this could be a problem of timezones but the timing on the updates always seems off for me, though they usually upload 2 chapters a day.Story Development, honestly, this story's development is really creative as it strings together the relatively uncreative stories into something more interesting with the reader (The MC) going through the various worlds and seeing the influence he has on them is still a wonderful experience.Character Design, unfortunately, this is where the novel dips a bit, as the characters are in my opinion too linear; their goals and ambitions and even their personality as a whole seem very rudimentary; of course, this novel still is leaps and bounds better than some of the stuff on this site but the character design is about at the quality you would expect from a weekly featured or a top novel on this site.World Background honestly this is always a complex thing to rate but I would say that the world background presented in this novel far surpasses what you would expect as the background of each world is thought out and well planned it's missing a stroke of brilliance from the writer in my opinion but it is still perfectly fine but it seems to be a missing inspiration but I can see why the author would have trouble finding a passion in his writing as each world are very different.Overall Review - Overall this is a good novel it's not something that I'd be checking every day but if I happen to be looking to read something this is pretty high up on my mental list the author clearly respects his work and is very professional in the way he writes things and he is a textbook standard author which can be both good and bad. Good in the way that he is meeting every expectation that I hold for my novels currently. Bad in the way that he's missing a spark of inspiration "A stroke of brilliance" so to speak, whether that be in some characters the story, the world, and sometimes even the MC himself is missing a certain spark that I believe would push this novel even higher than it currently is. (4.2/5)Hope this helps you decide whether or not to read this.
this is an almost perfect book.... needs some spellcheck and has a fair amount of grammatical errors... but the author has an amazingly wonderful imagination and should try to have it turned into an anime