I’m enjoying the novel’ the last part was Quite expected I like the details in combat and the reality it brings. Despite being his first book
The suspense is killer! Maybe drop some subtle hints about the bigger mystery earlier on? It’ll make the reveals feel even more mind-blowing
wait who'sgoing to get mc or no /.........?..................................................................................................
The MC is a dumb.WTF, he expels a lot of rapers from the community instead of killing him in the local.Think , you are a community leader , if you don't make a exemple , the others think will out withless any problemNo sense (CHAP 82)
SkylerAn’s “Alpha Instinct” is a story that hands down earns a special place in my heart. This is exactly the type of dark fantasy I’ve always wanted to read. It’s rich with dark and fleshed out lore, characters, and even the power system is beautifully crafted.The novel is written with fluid and vivid descriptions, creating brilliant imagery that I wish I can one day imitate.Leo is such a great and genuine character, and despite how sad I feel for him, I couldn’t imagine his story going any other way. His goals make sense, and the reader can resonate with Leo on an emotional and spiritual level.You’ve earned a full 5 stars from me author. TAKE MY MONEY!!
The writing style sometimes shifts abruptly. The updates for the chapter is kinda confusing, and I want more chapters to give a proper opinion.
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DO NOT READ!!!!You will only be pissed because there not many chapters available ????Author is a Slacker. There should be Hundreds of Chapters but only 50??? TThats just laziness. ?
The first chapter is captivating. I don't really read books like this but this one, listening to it gave a vivid picture of it.Listening to books like this is way better than reading. Good job, author. ?
the Author is just......the way suffering and sorrow is portrayed, it's unusual.and the Protag doesn't really know much in the way of happiness and unhappiness, too.her innocence has tugged on my heartstrings!few suggestions would be: 1st, hurry and kill Jules.2nd, i suggest you put some attention to spellings; because of the nice flow of story, it can be understood, either way, what you mean. but it has the potential to disrupt reading flow, too.it's a nice read, trust me. I wonder what more the Author have in-store.
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Overall the story development is the best thing of this novel. From all the subtle foreshadowing so far, I expect a great world-building from you author. Keep up the good work.