PeterPan
the author forget what he writes, the mc's int attributes is already reach 200 and yet after a few chapters it backs to 100+ again1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 01 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0
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Honestly when i first read the novel, i was expecting something like xianxia: ##### series, but i was in for a surprise, this book is great, cant wait for more.
Love the way author explain the world. Has a good story with good character. Actually want to drop when the mc bcome slave, I dont like slave troop because I hate seeing mc enslaved, but glad I keep read it because in the end mc didnt feel become slave at all and literally stop being slave after. Very recomended
Writing quality: Very good grammar, it is good to see new books with good grammar on Webnovel, really like itStory development: The story starts interesting and I, what a suprise, like it. She grows stronger and can evolve, to that is the system no stupid cheat which makes her op. Character design: She is a normal typical girl, a bit crazy sometimes when she sees beautiful people but cold when needed, which I truly like on herUpdate stability: 2 chapters a day is very good, a mass release was there a while ago too, so 5 stars, nothing else wouldnt make senseWorld background: Nothing much yet is known, but the story doesnt even have 100 chapters yet, but it is promising( Is she in Tensura? )My personal opinion: I like that there is a fmc which isn't the same cliche one, it is refreshing, with her growing party members which I hope won't be that big( cannon fodder not included), loved how she handled her first noble, hope that that with her brother won't be something stupid, Good luck with the story
A wonderful tale of a bastard in charge of a guild of cut throat mercenaries, any one of which in polite society would be strung up and beaten with a stick. From comical misha** of a cowardly warrior forcefully conscripted to a plushie loving one eyed berserker woman, from a towering crude titanblood to a happy go lucky eldritch horror associating warlock, from a wonderfully lewd demonic woman to a horse wanted for murder. There's no end to original characters who are funnier, crazier and down right entertaining from their first introductions to their exits stage right.Read this book if you want anti heroes, scheming bastards, an MC who is a male medusa and an author who brings all these inglorious bastards to life with seeming ease and no end of flare!
I just want to say hello to all the people coming from my other work here on webnovel. I have deleted the 3 other 5 star reviews that this has gotten because I want people to start leaving reviews only after I reach chapter 50. I hope by this time I can get a translator and nobody has to use google translate, this way unbiased reviews about the writing quality can be posted. The story is easy to read and there are very rarely spelling or punctuation errors. If I miss spell a word or need to fix some math, just say the word or math problem in the paragraph comment and I'll fix. No need to write anything other than that. Please don't leave comments about the lore of gods and other deities. I have changed and described them differently in the story than in real life. Don't read if that offends you.Please only leave comments about characters, locations, story development and history of both the real world or Ancients World. I will delete any comments pertaining to 'Logic' or 'Grammar'. The story is very well written and there is little to no reason at all to complain. Hope you all enjoy the story and have a great day!!
Alright, where to start with this.When I started reading this novel, I became hooked on it. The world seemed average nothing too unique but the idea of an MC getting godly swords every year on his birthday was interesting.I like his interaction with his sort of adoptive sister but you can quickly tell how their relationship will develop in the future.He has companions/disciples who surprisingly stay relevant and aren't just abandoned half way through, though I'll be honest, as the MC gets stronger and stronger their existence becomes weaker besides being used for comedic relief or creating ******* between the MC and some of the factions that exist in the world.This is all well and good except, it quickly gets boring...The MC is supposedly very powerful but the author constantly makes him fight completely overpowered enemies so frequently that the reader doesn't get any sort of sense of how powerful the MC is (at least for me) since most of his fights are barely won and only because he uses some OP ability granted by his sword that also leaves him crippled.Nearly in all of the chapters that have been translated, he is constantly running away or being chased by new factions he has offended.And speaking of powers, all the swords he gets have some sort of special ability and are given tiers and this is where I think the greatest failing of the novel is. The MC focuses on only using the most powerful tier of sword and that's fine but he hardly ever uses his swords logically. He just grabs the two most powerful and then uses all the other ones as basically artillery and we hardly ever read about him using his swords creatively or logically.For example, he gets a sword that the more evil the person he fights the more damage it does, but aside from when he gets it, he never actually uses it for it's ability despite frequently coming across enemies that hit the mark for using the ability.And that's the other gripe I have, he doesn't feel like an actual powerful warrior, just someone who heavily depends on getting the highest tiered sword and using it. It's like watching a pro player get a bunch of items he can use creatively but only using high ranking items because, "they're higher ranking so they must be better".In the end I'll still follow this novel for several chapters more but I'm almost at the tipping point to drop it.
