Solo tienes que hacerlo con calma y cuidado, no te estreses, muy buena idea y narrativa de los hechos, me preguntó si indagaras más en la historia de Mc o otra cosa o elementos que añadas según se desarrolen los hechos
"I really enjoyed the story and its themes of humility and redemption. While some parts felt a bit predictable, the emotional payoffs made it worth it. Emily is such an inspiring lead!"
We'ldone author keep it up???? sarangayor ?????????
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This book is amazing,i am loving it . Thanks author.
There’s an overarching fate plot…but my real gripe is that the relationships just feel so artificial still…and I can’t really get past that as I’m reading
I really liked your story, please keep it going!awesome ?
Shameless brother of author here??.Now on a serious note. To say the truth I love this book, many of you will say obviously you are his brother but to say the truth I never read his first book which he has deleted nowThis is one of the books I follow I love the fact that the MC is not so OP but still stronger than most Also I'm a big fan of system, well you guys and girls should at least try and read it Peace and goodbye✌?
Great Writing, Sturdy Story, Too Early to judge character design but seems decent enough, best updating Stability, world background seems interesting but we haven't explored it much.
Seems nice, female lead is strong-willed. Very rare in your plot seems most other novels are like "I went back 300 years ago just to know the past". While yours be like ey, let's smack down to 8 years.Anyway this is good. Nothing much to say, well doneTada. (っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ
Restless youth Isn't your typical slice of life novel. You will be in world of mystery while feeling thrilled at a same time. The main character Sakib is overtly smart and wise. And I think that's the main charm of this novel. The Female protagonist Meem is also very likeable. Some unique mysteries I enjoyed are lock room, mind read, dead lock game etc. The best comedy-mystery award goes to cockroach. And there's also some notable romantic moments between Sakib and Meem. The character's development are quite good. Those who wants to enjoy romance, mystery, slice of life, comedy in one package, this novel is just for you.
It's the second webnovel I read from I_Cook and its work of art once again. It's really easy to immerse yourself while reading; language and vocabulary used are superb, grammar is on point without mistakes and story just flow.Pacing is stable throughout the chapters so far (up to 141), no plot holes or too obvious plot armor and yeah ofc mc got good stuff, skills etc- look at the tags, he is supposed to be strong and op.I like that romance just happend without NTR or some young master lusting over fml for over 40 chapters like in other novels- it's adorable and hits that sweet spot you are craving from romance tag. (possible spoiler- FML is NOT useless ! and is NOT ice user xD) Chemistry between characters is great, dialogues allow to easily differentiate different people talking, with each of them having their own quriks etc; moreover it's not just dialogues, each character feels like real 3d living being and not 2d background character. If I were to point something out then it would be long descriptions to skills, items and whatnot taking a lot of word count, but it's matter of personal preference- some may skip it, some may like it. Personally I like reading these effects, my only worry would be power scaling xD But i strongly believe author will provide and story will continue to slap.