i've read till chapter 18 for now , so far so good and i love how characters are introduced and the pacing is good and the world it gives hope to something great
I really like the characters, they have different kind of humor. You can also easily imagine scenes and the powers they have. really excited to the twist and turns of this story.
way the characters are designed it's magnificent. I am always looking forward for every single update because once I read I feel like I have to read more, I think I need to sue the author for this!!! Because you're starting to make me an addict?, jokes aside I really have nothing to say about this I just hope that the author will have more inspiration so he/she would not stop to write hehehe, but still don't forget to rest. Thank you author!!!
I really liked the story. The characters are well written, the protagonist is intelligent and powerful, and the male protagonist's blinds are well done☺️?
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
it okay I'd love to see more chapters in the future
The clan was flummoxed.
Li Nuxie continued to feel her surroundings with her eyes still closed. She was the least worried of the people inside. In her opinion, the Vortex Team was the best. Although it was their first time to participate in this kind of mission, Li Nuxie was confident they can get it.
The shards of kryptonite were getting further and further from my erstwhile savior, and the little speck that did the trick was shooting at me.
You'll never know if you don't go
Only shooting stars break the mold
(she smiles evil to me?)