Zyanya - Reviews

Mc is your average japanese pushover beta cuck (literally gets cucked 1st chapter) character, stutters nonstop and even the sound of a woman speaking on the radio would make him blush, just the worst kind of mc you can ever get.

The story is good and all but, author should have put slow-paced tag unto the description tags. Great grammar and smooth flow of sentences. Nothing out of place or forced so far. Also, I almost forgot about the system, though it'll never come. This is my review, that's all.

I’ll be the first to admit I‘m not far enough in to give a proper review but there is something I want to say for potential new readers. At the beginning the characterization seems a little inconsistent. Other than that I really enjoy what I’ve read of this story and of others the author has written so I recommend giving it a try

Quite an interesting story. The protagonist seems to be in quite a tight spot having to risk his life all the time. Interesting to see his adventures in what he calls hell.

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Less than 5 non spam reviews won't read this novel especially when even the author is partaking in the spam. One 5* is shameless(no problem) but three? that's just taking the piss.....

If this was not fantasy:Marry her: you lose you freedom and get an annoying companion (and her annoying parents as a bonus Reject her: you get a slap and a life long enemy. Speak your mind: You get insta-killed.

the idea is simply wonderful. however, I feel like the implementation could have been better. there are multiple things that don't make much sense. I will only like to warn others that the start of the novel is a bit fast-paced and according to the script seems like the rest of it would be too. there seems to be present a sense of urgency but I believe its execution was not good enough.

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

I think overall the flow and story is good and addictive ???Really wish the author update again so that I can read it more ???Hopefully this year continue

This troupe is quite familiar. And the name of the novel explained almost everything there is to know about this novel. The author's gradual unveiling of the plot is quite interesting. Nice one.

I finished all 19 chapters and although I enjoy your premise and everything leading up to MC awakening his hidden gift, I found an issue with the execution of during the time Judgment and Pride were introduced. Chapter 14 and 15 were the biggest issues since we have sudden swaps between first person pov and third person pov. For example, you use "I