Good story's foundationGood story's backgroundGood story's pacingGood character's interactionGood character's personalityGood character's backgroundGood ...Good ......Well, many good things can be reviewed from this novel especially the MC. Not to mention that this story is using a historical reference, which makes is becoming more interesting and moreover since the entrance of the mental girl, some medic terms can also be learnt from hereSince I have taken a liking towards the MC, his personality to be more specific, I hope that there won't be abrupt change to his personality and please NO NTR! since I absolutely hate that ****Last but not least, thanks for writing this amazing story and I have to say that your grammar is quite excellent, there's no need to degrade yourself that much since there's only some typo, but the story itself is enchanted further by the fluid grammar usedThe occassional references and jokes used are also good to keep the mood upOnce more, thanks for the novel**: I've rewritten the review for the fourth time since it always failed to post before
