Young bride - Reviews

Another amazing book by this author. It will not disappoint.

I've read all the chapters available on this site. (60) Someone tell me if it's being/been translated any where else. This novel was really good actually and I got really into it and finished it in one day and was left kind of on a cliffhanger. The Main Character is great and has a good personality and the system is ok as  well. There's a lot of funny parts as well. I like his attitude and the way he retorts people. His sister is kinda annoying but she's ok too, she has a valid reason to hate him. I think eventually they'll have a better relationship. It's not really explained why he transmigrated, it's not mentioned if he died or how the guy he transmigrated into died. Also how the system activates isn't really clear, he goes into his pet shop and it activates saying a suitable soul has been detected and asks him to add a pet shop in the next 24 hours. Of course he's in a pet shop at that moment. I'm just saying I'm not sure what triggers it. You'd obviously think it's the pet shop but then wouldn't the system know he's in a pet shop?  (Nt)These are just minor things I'm picking on.Overall this is a great novel and I'm really hoping it gets chosen for translation so I can read more chapters. I hope it doesn't meet the same fate of Heretic Apothecary Genius and Phoenix Destiny...

The last story with this premise didn't get picked. So here's hoping for it to succeed this time.fillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfillerfiller

A major rip off right here. Very disappointed. Several novels are doing this right now. Reminds me of "complete martial arts attributes" ripping off wbma. I see several concepts straight off being copied from ultimate scheming system without much modification. But it has been forcefully inserted into the story making it very bad.starting from chapter 74.. protecting a village with a formation (random village he popped up at with no relationship with anyone).. offending a sect but resolving grievances by having a feast (no mention of the feast happening after that).. others trying to kill steal a monster as if they'd gain xp n mc trying to get the kill cuz he'll get points, but then people figuring out he's more troublesome n attacking him and so on.will drop more of such occurrences in the comments if I notice them

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The concept is good but the problem is the character development and story development are not upto the mark. The story is getting boring as i am reading ch 15.

Honestly, I was hoping for more from this story.  I generally enjoy the cliche of a weakling getting a cheat and becoming powerful.  But this story is just mediocre as of chapter 60.  Maybe it gets better later on, but I haven’t looked at any reviews from other people, so I don’t know.The translation / editing quality seems to be excellent (very few or no English grammar or spelling mistakes).  I can’t speak to the translation accuracy, but the story flows and is coherent.  5/5.The story itself, however, is just meh.  The pacing feels rushed.  The elders have the same cultivation strength as some inner disciples.  Etc etc.  2.5/5.Overall, 3.5/5.  It is readable and can help pass the time, but there are tons of other web novels that are more enjoyable to me, so I won’t be voting for this one.

Here is a review by the master => After reading this i think you need to improve your grammer and also vocabulary. There is still room for improvement as i see that you are new to this so you can improve a lot. Good luck. ?

As a new author, this story is surprisingly detailed. It definitely starts off slow but that's the appeal as it seems like every little single detail is explained. And it's explained in a pretty good way too.And it also seems like the author is updating 2 chapters daily? (I hope) with consistent updates, I think this novel can succeed.

"Next year today will be the 1 year anniversary of your death!"

'But...Who would have thought she would start laughing like a maniac after obtaining some few golds... Is the pay at home not good enough?! You practically do nothing at home other than playing pranks on people!'

Dugu Yan :" Dugu Yan level 35 control spirit master, spirit essence is Jade phosphorus Snake." While showing of her empress domineering while letting snake surround her body making her look more temperament.