Well, the idea was good.. kind of.
3 1/2 chapters in, and it was already kind of unbearable. It just seems like you have no clue what you’re doing, and need some time to improve.
You want the main character to be sarcastic so bad that it just comes off as cringey, and this whole thing where the boys and school are picking fights over a girl, and even crying when they see her with the MC is quite honestly just gross, and unrealistic.