Ymir’s Holy War(revised) - Reviews

First of all the writing quality is pretty solid.The updating stability need more time to be certain but at the moment it is great.The story development feels great, it didn’t appear to be rushed or without planning.The character design can be explored more deeply, but the story just started.The world background is great, because it is our world.

Greetings and Salutations... ?So there wasn't a lot of activity this month, but I promise next month, I won't fail to deliver every single day.  If there are any questions you have about 'God Ash' feel free to drop them down here. I'll answer to the best fo my abilities...I'd like to get as much feedback from you guys as possible...TNX

Hey there, you want to get this ring identificated ? YOU NEED 10k of gold..Oh you don't have it? Never mind, I will lend it to you for no f****ng reason. ... Oh you walk out to the quest that I just give it to you and find moreeee op items? It has to be a reasonable explication...Oh it just was on the floor. Nice.If you like a bland MC, OP items and skills Per chapter this is the novel for you ! Idk why people put 3 stars on this boring novel.

The story was really enjoyable and i liked how good the pacing was. In my opinion it was neither to fast nor too slow.I like the interactions between the characters and how well written they are.I read another Novel from the Author and i have to say i am impressed and enjoy them both.Please keep up the good work Author.

Tyler barely dodged their attacks when Heaven launched its thunder once more. Deciding that this couldn't go on, Tyler created a few thousand new avatars, as his previous ones were unfortunately either destroyed by the pressure, or left behind on the moon when he actualized his Reality Marble. Now that he had the advantage in numbers, the battle fell in his favor.

     As Kyle started to approach his childhood home—the little brown dot at the end of the street, Kyle noticed the human figure that got up from the garden chair. As they got closer Kyle could see his mother in full. The old lady was leaning on a walking stick as she waved frantically at his car. Kyle came to a stop in front of the house, and his mum climbed down the porch stairs before heading to stand by the driver's window that Kyle had wound down.

It was Villetta.

"Mom, I will leave now"

OK let's be friends... (he shakes her hand with a huge smile)

That explains who requested Yuuki's services for the summoning and why the conditions were as they were.

Many techniques and abilities that both could use, depended on their bond aside from their level of strength. In the past many summoners did not take this to heart and always when they needed it the most, their skills and coordination failed, leading them to the worst end possible.

Foundation realm