Xian Impact - Reviews

Hi, author, it's a captive read...I'm not a fan of the cultivated story but your book hooked me well. I'm eager to know more and more about MC's life.....

The writing is good (I love the intro) and and the world building is excellent, I won’t spoil you but you’ll find out after you read it. Anyone who likes cultivation related stories (or is new to this genre) should give it a read! Even though there are very few chapters now, I'm hooked to reading more. Look forward to more updates soon!

I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens.

Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point.

Well done overall.

Video games isn't my cup of tea but this story seems hella interesting! The concept seems unique and world building is pretty nice to.
Synopsis is a great opening and it attract you to read the story and to find out about this unique universe.
Great job!

This is an exciting read. The myth-making and world-building is really interesting. The pacing of the story is just enough to keep readers at the edge of their seats and waiting for more. I haven't read much works in this genre, but this is one of the best written ones I have seen here so far. Great work!

Your writing is good but i don't really read about cultivation novels, that's why i found the chapters little slow paced. I only read 4 chapters until now, but i think the story is starting to progress a bit. I would love to keep reading further if i have time. keep up the good work.

I had a very fun time reading this story and everything was laid out great. I didn't have trouble reading anything and I like the plotline. Good job author keep it up!

Such a nice and interesting story l must say.... The world that author has tried to create is hella good.....

The concept of video game looks very unique to me and never read these kind of books before so it attracts me the most and now really enjoyed reading it...
The writting style of author is also really great l must say.... Keep it up author...

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According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. To early to say, though.
And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right.

I read this book, and I gotta say, it's quite the interesting story line you got there. Seemed quite peachy at the start but great overall. Plus, love the comedy.

The language is outstanding with vivid descriptions that paints the world for you. There are also lots of unexpected events as you read on. What I also liked about it is that the story isn’t cliche, and the characters are well defined. You’d want to keep on reading to find out more about the world. Looking forward to more chapters!