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World Upside Down
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My main issuie is grammar, the overall story is decent.
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when I found out author was writing an original, it got me hella excited I mean I love the DC and Marvel fanfics I mean they're probably my favourite DC and Marvel fanfics and so far it seems that this is going to be even better
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Boy oh boy not even turn to man yet you already have that kind of dream..you think all girl are only like your 3 leg.what we need the most is love ahhhhh this story make you have a big dream guys???
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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I am greatly enjoying the writing style of this story so far! The protagonist/narrator is funny and definitely feels like the age he's described as. The silver haired girl is strange but intriguing. I look forward to continuing to read through this story!
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nora raised her head searching for kurono and the others yet to no avail, her vision was blurred by tears, she could hear the people on the neighborhood screaming and yelling for help, they are probably thinking it is a terrorist  attack, she thought.
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"Even though we're in no way under you?"
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"Sir, she has already gone downstairs," said Micasa.
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I made us both coffee and then brought our cups to the coffee table. Making my way back to the kitchen popping waffles into the toaster. "Anything else you like in the morning?"  she softly shook her head "I don't really get big appetites in the morning, so the waffles are fine for me." with that, I made our plates and then brought them to the coffee table.  We both finished and I had time to help clean up before going to work. "When Ryke gets hungry he will hit that bell on the pantry and when he needs to go he'll bring you the bags." I laughed and pet Rykes head.   "Aint that right lil man." He wags his tail and rubs his head against my leg. She nods and smiles small at him. "Alright I leave the house and him in your hands, I'll be home around 10." I grabbed my computer bag that has files inside and headed out the door.
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Sami est un jeune à 18 ans habit dans maison
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Pemuda: "Pak! Bagaimana ini, pintu mobil saya lepas! Berapa kerugian yang saya terima coba"
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"Catrina, listen to me-"

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