Will of chaos - Reviews

Really a good concept with reincarnating as a leech, pretty good ideas, and world creation, this work can turn out to be something great. Way to go author.

The novel goes well at first. Later on MC is nonsense, his brain does not work, his behavior becomes an anime hero, he becomes a hypocrite, he plays the good person. My goals are as follows, he says what they do is different nonsense. I have never seen a smart, sensible MC who has such a trick. None of them use the potentials of the cheat. In the hands of someone like aizen or orachimaru we can see a really sensible trick.

This novel has a good concept but is extremely boring. Instead of progressing with a story the author spends time going through a different side characters POV almost every chapter. It becomes annoying very quickly. The skills and levels are also translated wrong. One chapter he will unlock a skill, then 40 chapters later he unlocks the same skill again even though he has it. The same can be said about levels.

If the author focuses on the story rather then the POV of the harem it would be 4-5 star quality. But due to the above reasons and translations it’s barely 2.5 star quality.

its trash and boring , i can not go past 40 chapter. what a waste of time.it started good but it went down. he is just collecting girls no world building nothing

I don't like the herem part it's too common and honestly it's just a waste of time I think it slows down the MC's progress by 80% because of so many factors that come with having so many girls around him constantly distracting him thus making progress shower[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] but otherwise from that everything is okay

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not bad, but neither is it good. the book follows the reincarnation of the MC in a fantasy world. This book has the same premise as epic of caterpillar and goblin evolution. While the character is logical he is also only pseudo ethical. Basically his morals are pretty loose and his bottom line of what he will do is pretty low. Much like the books above the MC gains power by assimilation of his enemies. The MC also gains followers by saving them or forcing them to submit, he never actually wins anyone over the any other way. Based on what I've read so far, writing quality will probably start to suffer as more characters are added, as current cast already lacks depth. Writer does attempt to build side characters through doing pov chapters for them, but it all just seems like feeler material and doesn't really connect you with the character. Lastly there are alot of they that should I or him that should be I or her. Grammar errors kind of take away from the story. Over all this is a decent story that is replica of novels already on the site.

ahhh... this wouldve become so good if after his vampire evolution he wouldve gained a normal height. But this author decided to keep him as tall as a child, destroying the possible hint of romance that coulve accentuated the story and bond between the characters. Such a bad choice even though the story itself was good in spite of the bad translation (?) or just the bad use of pronouns.

dont read this, mc super beta, he collects a lot of girls but doesn't do anything, even when he sleeps and is hugged by some girls he still refuses to do it lol....

Superb and thrilling story line that's enough to make anyone's day when he's getting bored. Looking forward to get more and more....Best of luck

Good novel but i will not be reading it anymore the story is great everything is great but sadly i will not be reading for the simple reason that I DESPISE HAREMS in my opinion they ruin novels, at the beginning there was red flags but i had hope it was nothing, but next i will list the red flags i noticed ibuku talking about getting women for mc, enslaving the Erica and Diana and finally the one that made the authors intention clear Erica lying on mc’s chest with her arms and legs wrapped around him, and him not waking her up because she was ‘Cute and Innocent’ not  Also author please if your hoing to make a harem novel put it in the tags.

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Great story although i would reccommend the author that a better cover and name can do wonders for this story...............................................