whispers in the limelight

AMAZING!                                                                                                                                   

the concept is good but the rest is not, the story is like " the mc has a system, he fights and lvl up and face slap" there is no explanation and detail

So, people have been saying the mcs too strong, but it's been teased that there are people stronger, like way stronger than the Mc and some people like Natasha. The world building is quite good but could be better and the characters are quite interesting along with skills and whatnot. I love that the author goes quite deep into explaining the skills and / or the world and characters. I wish the author updated more consistently, but I enjoy each chapter once it's been released. that's why it's not 5 stars, but other than that, I highly recommend the book it's been a very good read.

i love the way you wrote this story.it makes me want to keep on reading on and on . keep it up,this dook is a dimond.there is a lot more i want to say but im not good at describing what i think.

Overall, I love it. Writing quality is awesome. The storyline you can get a clique vibe for the first time but just know that this is an original work.Characters? Why, I don't want to spoil it to you. Just read em.I've read a couple of system novel so... I don't know much but at least the system is actually driving the plot.To the author, don't stop writing, story must be told!

I like the story so far, the characters are amazing, the plot looks good. its a good book