When the secrets bloom. - Reviews

Ah this gives me inspiration

Tsk tsk, i approve of the MC, the MC has the features of an smart potato, altought he is a bit lacking to reach the rank of King Potato, he is not faroff, well not anyone could reach Sovereign Potato Rank like me, well is better than those ordinary novels where they only have trash potatos.

The story was interesting in the beginning, but gets worse as it progresses. Dropping it for now, will probably pick it up later when I run out of other novels and hope the story becomes better.

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I'll be blunt. Fans of sign-in novels have a mental illness. There's no conflict, there's no tension - power isn't earned, it's just given. This isn't altogether terrible by itself (wish fulfillment can be great fun). What is terrible however is how seriously sign-in novels take themselves. They pretend as if anything the MC does actually matters, when in-fact, the MC could fall asleep on the bus and wake up barraged with 'supreme', 'godly', 'divine', 'platinum' rewards.

Author, with all honesty, your English is horrendous. You might not realize it, but the way you write is very confusing and many words are unnecessary.If u need me to list examples, I'll do so with a correction too. But I ignored that, since if I like a novel I'll read despite the hurdles. As for the story, nothing really original fyi tbh.. not that it's bad, I don't mind it. But everything is way too rushed, he becomes lvl 10 when everyone is 2&1, he doesn't even struggle killing the boss announced globally, just slash and hack, no dodge, no low health.. nothing no struggle. again, lvl2 vs lvl 15! And the CEO of the gaming company is kind to him, only kind. Yes, he offered on the phone to buy him a house, cars, pets, jets, guns and the world? And he did, the most expensive too! it's like he had a son that he now remembers? and when knowing the MCs linage(warring states era's leading martial linage), he starts crying thanking God for letting him know that the one they should serve is alive??? A cult?hmm.. What is this nonsense, seriously?.. he made 2 million $ or wtv in 2/3 days? If weed knew this, he would start killing left and right, kill himself at the end, revive, kill himself again, a loop. Oh and supposedly this isn't a harem okay? Fine even better. But noo, it can't be that dream novel?? where there's no actual harem, right!!!!??Yep u guessed right. No harem. But u look right, there's a girl "oh my so hot and cool, can I have a screenshot?" Everytime. Then left, oh not surprisingly another girl?!?? "sooo rich and handsome, if only I could marry him I will forever be happy". Idk wtv doesn't suit my taste, author I hope you improve and I sincerely urge you to check up on earlier chapters every now and then and not neglect keeping them up to date with your improvement. Reached chapter 20, couldn't continue on my injured soul.. good luck!

This is amazing, I couldn't predict the twist of this story. I recommend it to my friends and they loved the settings of this story. Nobody can say no to this. I really loved it.

To my relief, there was no hitch of any sort in my jump. My surrounding turning from a wide castle into a dishevelled laboratory of some sort.

'Y'know, I only realized how weirdthat wallpaper would seem to other people when my mom pointed it out. I mean, a flat chested girl with an open grey hoodie would seem pretty weird for someone not used to ecchi...and thank god that there's no nipples. I draw the fucking line at nipples, ok Alexa?!'

In a small apartment lived a simply family of four: the dad Jeremy , mother Rose , son David and daughter Mary .They lived as normal was everyone else , within the eyes of society these guys are normal people but in the eyes of justice they are monsters , MONSTERS I say  , now you might think that i am overreacting but you will know why i say this soon ,very soon.

Only shooting stars break the mold

"Really. Let us see whats your grade on the upcoming examination" Kyota said this with a threathening face.