We're all mad here - Reviews

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author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x  skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women ,  balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation.(I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.

I love this book and the author's creative idea. The storyline flows well as it develops. Usually not a fan of this genre but I feel like this one is creative enough to engage the reader. Good job on the work. Looking forward to more updates...

wow, just wow. how exactly did you come up with this, because I want to share your muse. LIKE SERIOUSLY HOW ARE ALL THE WRITERS ON HERE SO FREAKING GOOD! ?! !;?! ?! !! ?! ?! !

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If you wanT To know truly my opinion then i will say author destroyed his good story.  1st of all can you clarify us that are you writing novel pr biography?  when i read i don't get the feling of reading novel i feel i am reading a biography. and every character is behaving lije a robot.  even though they are showing emotion i have to say i fell you didn't get depth of a character &  the story is getting rushed. power system is also have a problem you can understand by going ch 8. & technic how they work you didn't say. you didn' t use system efficiently.  lastly world background?  there is none .  which empire? who rule what?  it might have at letter ch but sorry i got bored of reading same theme.  but if you solve every problem then i can say this will be   a greate story..

"Hello Master, Heavenly Demon God's Memories have been integrating into the System. Due to your lack of strength, the memories above Qi Condensation realm have been locked. You will be able to access them once you reach a higher level."

The portal closed behind us after Grea went through.

"You may be right, this place doesn't have something that will leave a mark in our memory, but we only came here to test whether or not we are qualified to become an adventurer, and if you want to go to a place where you can have some fun, The City Of Dreams, Porygon, would be more fitting"

That was just the beginning and after that day, there was no stopping them; even when she caught him red handed with other girls, he always came back on his knees telling her she was the one he loved and that the other girls didn't matter. Foolishly she believed him.

"Please stop calling me like that!.... But you can just be my sister right?"

A fine blend of mystery and supernatural elements from the start. I'm looking forward for this one. Can't really give a detailed review since there are only six chapters. I'll be adding this to my library.