Warcraft Lord

Holy crap reincarnation novel that the lover follows him? DAMN      dats pretty goodNow git filled up to 140 characters

Its a great novel with a great character development slow and steady. No rush or something with a detailed plot , in the end its a novel worth reading....

The world-building is nice, and the MC is solid. Overall, the book really gives off the vibe of another land, and it pretty much captures the surrealness of that said world. Just a minor tweak though, you can lessen the paragraph division so the readers won't be encouraged to skip through the dialogues. Adding a couple more words on a sentence said by a certain character will really help with engagement... not too much though since that would bore the readers. I tend to in the opposite spectrum where I make all my paragraphs longer... and that's a bad habit I couldn't get out of my system. You're writing style is fresh, you just have to make it smoother. An interesting read overall, definitely sticking around for more ^_^

One of my favorite genres ☺️. I won't give a five star rating 'cause we don't have chapter 5 and more to read ?Can you please upload more and don't leave us in the dark for ever? ☹️. It fits the real genre - thriller! Yay! ?

August 30: Now I know why the guards didn't ask questions, She's actually one of the founder of the Island..... I have stayed here for a long time and learned alot of things. So without my parents consent I transferred....

Volaris Familia, the guardian of The Temple of Jupiter.