Wander West, in Shadow - Reviews

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The book is really good. What I liked particularly about it is that it flowed nicely. The pacing was just right, not fast or slow. It has a way of arousing a good amount of curiosity that keeps one reading.Nice one, Author-san.

I haven't read a good VRMMORPG Novel in a while, so this has me hyped. It has a good storyline, and I hope for more action and reveal on the part of the Mc. It's not perfect, but it's still refreshing to read.

well, although the writing quality is a bit low but still it's much better than reading those novels on trail read where everything is like 100x bonus, 10000x bonus, being fully OP from the very start. A nice read for me, just keep updating regularly ?

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I’ve only read to chapter 15ish but I like the story already....every chapter I read, the pace and excitement in the story picks up.So this guy is forced to be ‘friends’ with some mean people and one day storms off and went missing blah blah blah then his parents send him and 7 other kids to this one dreamworld (a video game like place where people who where special headbands when they sleep can go) where he gets a special pet and starts his journey as a traveller (pets or comrades do all the work for you) he faces a few minor challenges then these random green armoured dudes show up searching for the 8 of them for some reason and they manage to temporarily escape by a hair......idk wuts next but it’s better than I can explain it.

Hmm sci-fic novel. Already got a twist of an adventure.... Wanting a peaceful life but everything goes AWOL or changes wen MC meets the silver haired girl. Not really a sci-fic person, not that I have anything against it, but this particular story got me hooked up. Nice storyline. Good work author.

I like this type of story with detectives, cases, and a spice of supernatural, so this story is right up my alley. The beginning is well written, and I have a good impression of the characters so far. The world background still hasn't been uncovered much, but I think it won't be bad so I'm giving it 5 stars in advance (I have high hopes for the author).The only thing that's bothering me is the writing quality. At most I can say it's average and it's good, but I think it's better to find an editor/proofreader or use a software to help fix some mistakes.That's all. In the end, I DO recommend this story because it will be a good read once it has more chapters.

i can be a good novel.....honestly i didn't get it now WN is only using MTL and it is so difficult to understand what is going on specially in stories like this......i felt like i lost the story around ch 7 or 8

I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre.I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid.- The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet.- There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place.  it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either...- The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.

I've read up to chapter 23.  Is one of the Cuttlefish Who Loves Diving Deep's newest series.  He is the creator of Throne of Magical Arcana, Martial Arts Master, and The Sage Who Transcended Samsara, all of which are currently on this website.  Out of the other series he has written, this one is most like Throne of Magical Arcana.  The genres for this series are horror, suspense, mystery, steampunk in a Victorian setting, and supernatural/fantasy.This thrilling supernatural steampunk mystery starts a bit slow in order to fully-develop the world, but then it dives deeply into mystery and supernatural elements.  Even though everything is still quite a mystery at this point, the suspense is enough to put me on the edge of my seat and keep me there.  I am looking forward to the cases the MC will be investigating, and I am absolutely delighted Webnovel finally picked up this treat of a series.