Void Progenitor: My SSS Void Skill Transcends Reality - Reviews

read up to chaptor 21 which is the most updated chaptor right now. I can say I really like the plot, and the ideas that the author seems to try to be going with. with that said though, 4 chaptors of what I would call worthless back story is kinda a let down. I can see certain back stories in the future but 1 back story taking up 3 chaptors alone is a problem. that back story was not needed tbh. I just feel 3 chaptors were wasted on which could have been action or something else. chaptor 21 is also a start of another back story so we will get atleast 5 or 6 chaptors in a row of back story that is prolly wasted chaptors.  good thing is atleast I am not paying for it or I would be a unhappy camper.

The start is dynamic and attractive, while usually, the norm is to write in the past tense author had chosen to use present but it's not a bad thing per se. Character design is unique and genuine in my opinion.there is no information dumping and the story flows appropriately which is good. Updates are stable enough that readers don't have to wait. the only flaw I found in the narration is that it is tough to read conversations because there is no gap between them and it leads to confusion about who is saying what and which part is said and which part is not. I think it can be corrected easily so it's not a big issue. good luck for the author.

Refreshing story about game.. story development look good and not so fast or slow... The main character is cool but sometimes his moral is low.. and background story is so good to much job choice

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WOW, what did I just read! this is very captivating from the very beginning and the way the author keeps the suspense floating describing the personalities keeps you bound to the book. Keep up!

I usually don't write these unless the story deserves it.  this story is the best I've read in a really long time.  the characters have growth, not unnatural relationships, and just are fun to read about. the j fo dumps are natural. they don't leave you wishing to skip ahead. the world is amazing. as a fan if mythology,specifically Greek, I can't find a better book. the author does amazing work portraying a different vibe with the goddess Nyx. I honestly can't wait to read how this mother figure in his life held him get past his somehow deep trauma. his family, sister and aisha, treat him like a family would. the story is well written, nothing unnatural. I can't wait to see how he handles bianca and Anna. author you will keep getting my coins and votes. keep it up!!

Pros: I think your storytelling is great. The way you let the facts sink in is also great. But for a Naruto fan, some parts of the explanation may feel boring. Having watched Naruto myself years ago, I think the way you have darkened the universe is something many old Naruto fans would want.Cons: First of all, even if you mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or the review that it isn't a fanfic, it gives a fanfic vive. I don't know about the future chapters but for now, the pacing of the story is quite slow. I know that the words for the details to sink and to give info just in case someone with zero knowledge of Naruto reads it; it is also important to minimise those words to a bare minimum so that it feels like the story is progressing quickly. If you planned the slow pacing, I can't say much about it.

It was a shock to Roger when Garp yelled "so you think staying in this little Island is what will make them happy? they are children, No matter if they are a hundred years old I can still see the same look in their eyes as my son, you need to know what they want and it is probably the furthest from staying on this Island"

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