Visarion - Reviews

So far the book has been good. I like the development of the story, but I feel that not much has been introduced in the world background of what's going on besides trying to save the world. As in the goddess role aside from creation, or the god of destruction role behind the demon Lord's. I feel like it should introduce more of those aspects to explain their existence. My opinion of the storyline is that it is set good, but it's at a fast pace for the amount for chapters it has. For  example his strange feats through his childhood aren't explained, besides the little introduction related to a selective memory skill. The book in it self has a good grasp of the style of OP MC. Overall it is a good book that's just starting.

It was good for a while Then I realised this is yet another worthless system novel Why is the system plot so popular on this appI genuinely hate system novelI feel it just ruins everything fantasy or eastern fantasy stories are all aboutbtw It's just my personal opinion and not review for novel

I really do love this amazing book, it's really perfect and really interesting to read ☺️☺️, Like seriously, I really love the book so very much ??..keep it up author ?

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

The storyline is great along with the plot but the grammar and punctuation is pretty bad. The storyline and plot support each other and you are not being confusing but the grammar and punctuation make the story hard to understand as it mess’ with how easy it is to read. I would proof read a couple of times to make sure it is ok and flows nicely

An amazing story from the author. I really xo like the story and the plot. The character design is great. I wish very good luck to the author.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.

nice....................................

What can I say? This novel is just another level, the grammar is good, and there are some mistakes but that's normal, and is more than possible to read it.We have at least one or two chapters every week, and that's fine with me.The story development is very interesting, bruh he is a WORLD, and the author doesn't hurry the story.Furthermore, the character design and the world background also are very nice, character design can improve, but they have something uncommon, they are ALIVE. And the background is still making but so far is very good.

Now was the time to give everything in a single roll of dice, while the bets were placed only had to achieve his goal and would come out of this.

That was all I remember about the legend of Aeyldarr, an omnipotent and all-knowing god who saved the world of Irilla, twice. Also his disciples, the Avraerion whom protected the elemental temples. Don't blame me if I didn't narrate it very well and there were missing parts of the story, my head hurts when I try to remember it.