Virtually True - Reviews

The story and characters are really nice, and pretty well written, besides a small abundance of grammatical issues. It's excusable though, since I assume it is not a born English author writing this. The world building sometimes falls into the background, and I wish the story took some times to actually develop things and let the story slow down a bit, but if that was added into later chapters, this will be a really nice read!

MC killed 1800 skellys in 1 hour, that's like 1 skelly per 2 seconds... holy cow imagine 2000 skeletons on top of each other and he also has to thrust 1800 times nonstop as a ordinary student even extreme athlete couldn't handle that.MC gets OP skill, that's normal...But WTF is with only 3 min cooldown!!!!Now only 15 chapters in he has 700 stats for all attributes and he gets, WTF is with this over the top stats? Do the Chinese have something to compensate for that they need insane high numbers at a low level?All side characters are literal retards, instead of confronting the low level mobs with a little intelligence they rush brain dead into their weapons...The MC summons 3 creatures which has a extreme showy effect that the whole city could see. 1 summons seems like no one gives a ****, 2 summon some low life see it and thinks its a treasure, 3 summon some other low lifes seem to see the extreme city wide effect and they are astounded and think that's a treasure. OK so didn't they see the 2 other summonings? SRSLY this novel is so over the top ridiculous it's destroying my braincells, if this is what the Chinese like, no wonder 90% of them are retards.

i don't care how the good this book is BUT THE PROBLEM IS the protagonist is TRAP!!!and there is no warning anywhere saying mc is trap which something most such  writers atleast mention somewhere totally ruined my time ,here i thought i would be have a enjoyable read .sigh P S even if u delete this review atleast put it in discription that the protagonist is a trap so atleast u won't ruin other readers mood or waste their time

I think this novel has potential (idk what you guys think about it) , and this is my second favorite among the six new trial read. Only I Am A Necromancer is my first, korean novels are good.Also. Qidian, please change the name in the cover, it says Fiend but it's supposed to be Demon. That's all.

just reading the description made me wanna read it jajaja, tough that "dragon sword" i was imagining "her" growing a rod jajajaja that would have been fun, a futa MC ????

story tooooooooooooooo hastyoh this is the system, you are the enemy, attack, THE ENDooooh holy smoke, rainbow is beautifuone two three, dad went to the market and mom read the paper

Rated low simply for grammar and first person writing. I did this and I did that do not make for an interesting story to read. I struggled to read even the first page

This novel reminds me of Saga of Tanya the Evil. Well, that's how I visualize the story as I keep on reading. The writing style is easy to follow and understand. The length of every chapter is quite short although it never fails to the intensity of every chapter. But If there's one thing to point out though, it's probably the introduction of the power of the MC. It takes me a few minutes to understand how her power works. Although, her power is interesting and I'm interested in how it will develop and be integrated into the story.

Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.

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