Vespera - Reviews

I'm fan of cultivation novel, this is one of the good so far I've  read. The story has so much potential. Currently I'm at chap.150 and I wanted give few advice if author don't mind .1. I noticed you skipping 90% of fight just by announcing the result. IMO it'll be more entertaining if add how he defeated hus opponent or how he was defeated in a fight.2. In important fights even try to the give description of the technique, stance how the weapon look like etc3. Add more detail while describing character because it help us imagine the in head. Like what their height how their figure ( silm, skiny, well bulit etc)  how the look like, what they're waring etc.4. If you can then give us a auxiliary chapter regarding details of cultivation realm, like the name of the initial level, grades of alchemist and formation master, also level of the alchemy item (Pill, Potion), array level, weapon grade etc.

interesting world development .main character is not unsympathetic oneinteresting world development .main character is not unsympathetic one

the mc is "bratty" and have "denial" issue. he said he read many manga and novel(?) but.....I can't do review. so I'll stop now..........review at chapter 29

I adore this writing and the character development is great. I get anxious when I've finished the published work and have to wait for the next chapter!

Paying for a fan fic is just ridiculous.

I’ve actually just started to read this book and all I could say is i’m loving it so far. This book gives me a mysterious yet exciting vibe to it. I’m very excited to keep reading it so keep up the good work writer!

Oh likey very much ??? Seems to be a very interesting story! The summary makes the story looks to be a great read and a great novel. I will read this story for sure. High rating is what I’ll give it for now??Keep the story coming.

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Personal opinion…. but author you could really condense the first 20-30 chapters as the majority of the stuff in there feels like really pointless filler. It’s a reall mental marathon getting through it. I’m going to drop this for now.

"Hey," Himitsu interrupted, looking towards the gym's stage platform. There was a podium and an empty table beside it. "When do you think the orientation will start?" Just then, a loud siren started blowing, catching everyone's attention as they averted their attention towards the stage. When the alarm ended, something just shot right out of the podium. It did a triple flip before landing onto the table beside it.

Zaphreal narrowed his eyes and scanned his surroundings. He was on a little red hill surrounded by red, glowing eggs and demonic birds flying over his head.

"Laz!" the princess screamed while running. "are you okay?!" she asked as she shakes the body guard body, deciding it's not enough she removed the helmet from the knight revealing a 'pretty boy' with a blond hair, flawless face… if you dismiss the blood on his head (hitting your head on the floor while wearing a metal armor sounds painful), and his white teeth that's been soaked in blood too, mind you.