Vendetta beneath a broken sky - Reviews

This review had already been done before but I comment: My Marvel Academia is a fan story created by DuckLordEthan in Devianart, but this story recreates that world completely through the bases of My Hero Academia, however it will not follow the MHA chronology because It is not a copied and pasted story, the story will be completely new and unique as if it were another Marvel universe. I hope you enjoy it and thank you.

Love this. Too funny. The system is a troll. I need moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi hi! As I published 64 chapters, it's time to speak about what you'll expect from reading my novel.First the novel isn't fast paced, as I designed the first volume to be all related to the mc, the secondary characters, enemies, and such.The game starts officially from Volume 2, precisely at chapter 53. The size of chapters vary. The early chapters are long, but later on they will get slightly shorter in comparison.The story is about a pro gamer who got screwed by his father in law. So it has romance, twists, and deep plots that will appear later on.The start of the game will be centered around Hao and his journey to establish a strong guild in the game. Then events will shift towards fighting pros and rivals, fighting in tournaments, just like our modern days tournaments.I planned this novel to exceed 1500 chapters, slightly more or less. I'm now maintaining a release schedule of one to two chapters per day. If you want more chapters, just use summoning pens and I'll add more in response.Thanks for trying out my novel. And I'll write another review at chapter 200ish.Have a nice day!Ranmaro

Hi author DhaRylLoner I just want to say that your story Once Upon A Mistake is not just a novel. It will nice if webnovel will make a film adaptation on this story. It is so awesome story! I would like to read it again and again. I am still waiting for the book 2 by the way. Hehe that's all and thank you for the very awesome story!

I very rarely rate 1 star, but this novel is the epitome of trash. Don’t waste your time.                                                   

I love how hashiba came back just to tell yonome he was right all the long and told her to make it up to everyone I feel like after Chapter 14 yonome will have more character development

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"It is you ...," Writerz answered with his innocent face.

this is my first time reading book about gamesand I completely fell in love with this one.Luel?

The novel started off a bit slow but was great overall. In the first few chapters, the MC takes some time to build an emotional connection, but the transition involving the maid's sudden discard felt abrupt. It could’ve been handled more smoothly to build emotional tension.I've read around 45 chapters so far, up to the point where Gracile kiss the MC and goes to her home. The biggest issue I’ve noticed is that many chapters after chapter 15 could’ve been shortened or even removed entirely. I ended up skipping quite a few of them as they felt repetitive and dragged out. Honestly, I wanted to quit at that point, but the romance  with the maid kept me reading .The author focuses more on the brighter side of the noble family, which I found refreshing and appreciated.I’ve only read less than 50 chapters in one go, skipping or fast-forwarding the repetitive or non-plot-related chapters. After finishing My House of Horrors, I tried some other novels like The Way of Kings, but I couldn’t get through the slow pacing. I also tried several titles on Webnovel, but finally found this one that kept me hooked through the first 50 chapters.I don’t have much time, but I’ll continue reading whenever I’m free. My request to the author would be to slightly increase the pacing, make every chapter plot-driven, and maintain a good balance between tension and romance. It feels like a pure romance novel at times, even though it’s supposed to be fantasy—but it’s still really good. So keep writing. Best luck.Additional Note: Please try to apply the "show, not tell" technique—it will make the story much more engaging and enjoyable.Sorry, I’m writing this review based only on the first 50 chapters. I’ll edit and update it after reading more.

Great! What a dark life. Let's see where this end to. Good work, author