Veins of the Eternal Sky

waiting for more chapters.         ..........

The concept is good, but how do I say this? The novel is just bland. It has no taste, no essence, no soul.Hdjdhhdhdjdjdjdjjdjjdjjdjdjjjdjdjjdj

Interesting writing. There are lots of characters and world buildings that might be a challenge to follow at times. But the story keeps me going. Will continue reading

Well, I'm sure the whining phrases of "this is cut/paste" like other Eastern Fantasy novels.Who cares?  As long as it's a good storyline then I'm fine with it.  There's a couple of cool elements like a non-human clone and a non-monster pet.And hey, an aphrodisiac scene that somehow didn't end in an eyerolling excuse.  A little sweet.

This book is one of a kind. Totally different from the system books I've read. The grammar is excellent and makes reading super fun. At first, I didn't know where Ed and his grandmother disappeared to until I read your note. If only he'd known how hellish choosing to be a system would be, he would have done to the world instead. I hope all his sacrifices and suffering are worth it. There is nothing to criticize about it book it's wonderfully written and the description is splendid. Kudos to the author.

(Hiruzen) "I don't wish to force my Jonin, I will let you five decide by yourselves."