Upon A Time - Reviews

this is a good book

FIRS....*sob* How cruel, *sob* I'm 2 hours too late ! ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

very good novel ?⭐⭐?????⭐⭐????⭐????⭐⭐??⭐⭐???⭐????????⭐???????????⭐⭐?????⭐⭐⭐??????⭐????⭐?

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Just a rewrite of my review without being opinion biased. the MC could use a little more back story early on, leaves a lot of unanswered questions early on, who he is, how he got to where he is etc etc, nothing to big, but could use some work. Not enough lore too know what's what and who's who but detailed enough not to get lost, maybe a prologue chapter that explains the world a bit and how the mc came to be?Excellent writing quality, didn't notice any grammatical errors. could do without the creepy accent though.

"Sigh! There's no need for her to explain, indeed I'm Han Wu the 3rd prince of Han Empire. Whether you know about it or not makes no difference…for your all going to die today!" said Han Wu coldly. Without waiting for the latter's response he waved his hand. "Attack!"

"I think I'll give up on [Corpse Feeding]…Anyway my Guardian Spirit Beast is not the thorny flower, it's a [Treeman Warrior]. I would only use the thorny flower to practice controlling technique anyway, I've never used it for battle." Lin Bing shook her head as she quickly refused. She couldn't even stand the thought of eating an Iron Fur Mice, let alone wanting to eat it!

"How dare you speak to me like that! Who the hell are you pig, to say those words to this young master!? Of course I'm serious. I'll report this old geezer to the police station and have him pay for the damages to my car! So you just scram to the side!"

Aziva clutched on tighter and shook her little head. Jace felt his heart clench at the sight, he put his hand on her head. "I'm a knight Aziva, it is my duty to protect the city from threats. No matter how scary they are. I'm going to need you to take care of your mother till we come back."

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