Until Mia (Until Series #1) - Reviews

Hey, newbie here. This is the first novel i've actually followed through in this website. The writing is great, I would give 5 start if it's only a bit more detailed like I've seen some parts of the story where I've thought that Chen's club is actually in the middle of literal nowhere, and I just realized that there are some structures around it after I've read the following chapters.As for the story development, I have no issue with it for the most part. You sure know how to keep the readers from going away just by the way you set up your plot.For updating stability... I can't really blame you.When it comes to world background; you've actually managed to keep everything intact after all the complexities of the story. everything goes so we'll that I've never even questioned most of the world building related stuff that you write.that's it from me, I hope you'll continue to write this til' the final chapter. I really enjoyed this a lot, thank you for making this. <4

I voted for The Spiritual Attainment of Minghe instead of this and boy do i feel stupid, this is far more interesting and easier to read then that sack of **** The Spiritual Attainment of Minghe novel crap.

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Amidst the laughter of the teenagers, Alex, who won the spar, didn't really feel the glory of winning. Rather than smiling, his face kept a frown and a fearful demeanor.

'this is!!?'

AS someone with Asperger's I approve of this rewrite

'That jerk! I couldn't sleep last night at all! who told him to kiss me? Does he kisses everyone to express his gratefulness? what a weird guy!'

Exp

It allowed him to channel kinetic energy through his leg, giving his shots an unstoppable speed and power. He had used it countless times to bend the ball in impossible trajectories, to strike with such force that goalkeepers simply couldn't react.Perfect ? interesting ? concise ?

at first, I was confused. but moving on it turned out quite nice; the lighthearted banters is a nice one. and the world building is very unique - dormant mysterious energy discovered in humans.there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty

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