UNKNOWN HEROES - Reviews

Nice story. I will be there to the end

I HAVENT READ YHE BOOK YET BUT IT LOOKS REALLY GOOD.... WHO WAS WONDERING WHY YOU STOPPED WRITING?? AND I WOULD LIKE U TO COME BACK AMD FINISH IT!!!!!

As expected of Gaasuja, always knows how to deliver!Another great start to another potentially amazing book!Let's hope the execution is just as good!

Here's a review from chapter 1-40The story take place in a game where people can't log out, there isn't any specifics on what happens to the one who dies inside the game. The game is 'feudal lord' so it is a kingdom building game. Mc is a feudal lord (of course) and is basically similar to other novels like 'the world online, etc. Our MC has a cheat (well he is the mc), it's like a bug or error that maybe only he has. It is not really OP because the cheat is an achievement system where he needs to recruit special heroes(which are not easy to get) All I can say is his cheat is like a late game item that is kinda useless in the early game.

Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

Damn, It was very good prologue.                                                                                                             ..

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Honest Opinion so far. The story has little chapters but I'll still leave a review as I believe the story is good but needs to go through editing for some chapters, as noted in previous reviews of others. The story itself is good but grammatical errors, punctuation, and so on could use some fixing but that's a common issue! Easily fixed but I believe the story is still worth reading otherwise. The plot is well crafted, the world building is captivating, and the character building is done well. I would recommend reading, just keep doing your best Author! You got my support!

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"Ehm, ehm, can I have my gym badge? "Aiden coughed to drew Cilan 's attention.

"gue ke sana bentar ya,lo duluan aja pada"

I hope you enjoy your second life mortal .