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Have you ever loved a story but had moments where you absolutely hated the main character and his stupidity? This is that series for me. .

WowI'm high as F right now.Finally Qidian made my dream come true with a decent update rate.Hope you guys can keep it up.My question is if I can donate to the translator to give them a hat off to their terrific work.The newest chapters have a very good quality compare to Wuxiadream.Well, great job you guys.All 5*

I haven't finished reading it yet but I am loving the story from the start. I love Bai curiosity, adventure and determination to achieve his dream and it's really working out well for him, he is literally destined for such forfune that he is to be

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Like the story’s main plot so far but have a lot of character holes that need to be ironed out. There are grammatical errors that need to be corrected so worse than others. Punctuations arent used properly at times either. MC does some contradicting things at times but that is ok as people do that in real life. Hope it gets edited before you charge people but good luck.

Nice title ..nice story.. but the author needs to work on how he present.. his/her narration.. it's exhausting when the me is always confused, thinking on necessry  things..there is a simple thing I  would always like authors to consider . try and imagine yourself in a situation..  then ask another person how he will react..  you will notice . reality and fallacy are World apart .

The MC is so stupid it makes me seem like a genius. He doesn't eve acknowledge the fact that he is in another world, he is very slow and keeps apologising to pre-recorded messages and to things that are just exp bags.

I love how their story went because it's so refreshing.it has something that other story (mostly) doesn't have?I love it. So please continue writing this story cause it's fun to read?

Hey guys hope you like the novel I'm not the original author but someone who loved the story and wanted to post it here

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